Okay, how is one untrained village boy gonna beat up She-Ra? Even if she didn't use the sword to transform Adora has been training for battle her whole life. And a cocky little thug is gonna beat her senseless? Nope, not buying that at all. It's also kinda lazy writing to have Adora constantly in some medical trouble, geeze, it's one injury after another.

It's written well. No constant spelling or grammer mistakes but the situation is kinda unbelievable.

When will this story be updated?! I'm seriously-crazy as to what happens next now that Glimmer knows of Angella being on good terms with Adora. Maybe have a bonding of Glimmer and Angella in regards to what she learned from Adora. I'm already imagining what's gonna happen next with these two. Maybe even add a part where Glimmer gets a 3rd try to kiss Adora. Just something to keep in mind. ;) Please!

When r u going to update on this website? I'm seriously-crazy curious as to what happens next. I know snuggling is going to be involved, but what about the thing with the guard that harasses Adora based on her past. Maybe another bonding moment with Angella. Please update this story.

When are u going to update?! I'm super stoked about what's going to happen next. Is Glimmer going to talk to her mom about what she heard from Adora? A little cuddling? Come on. I'm really eager to know what happens next.

Grrreat story!

This fanfic is amazing. Please post more!

that was incredible!

Awesome update! Love the part where Glimmer gets a surprise notion that her mom, Angella somehow treats Adora the way she takes of Glimmer. Here's a thought for your next chapter: try doing a bonding moment between Adora and Angella, maybe play some chess. Just something to keep in mind. ;)

it's been so long! But this chapter finally came out and I couldn't wait to read it! This really is the way I would see adora and glimmer reacting to this. Adora is a very hard nut to crack and likes to close up again as soon as she can. I'm really glad Angela is being kind to her, she really needs some motherly love.

And another almost kiss! Glimmer needs to stop overthinking it and just do it the second it comes to mind instead of giving adora time to dodge out! lol

Great chapter, and as always I cant wait for the next one! (maybe show what catra is up to, or even shadow weaver)

When are u going to update? Hopefully before August 2 'cause that's when Season 3 airs. I'm crazy about Adora and Angella having a bonding moment at the least. Maybe have Angella watch over Adora in her room while Glimmer is on another mission. Just something to keep in mind. ;)

YO! Let's just say I've read a lot (I mean A LOT) of fanfics in my day, and this is legit the best most heavy and amazing and just feel-y angst I've ever read. And to top it all it even has a plot that feels natural with the story telling! Man please keep writing because this right here? This is professional writer material with these feels. I can't wait to read more!

Hey, you are pretty good. I only understand 45% of the text, but, I think you are pretty good! I'll be continue reading.

Sweet ending to this chapter. Already I'm wondering if Madame Razz is going to show and offer Adora & Glimmer a place to stay because of here injuries. Because then Glimmer would learn about another person has been living in the Whispering Woods like Bow. Secrets like that won't last forever. Just something to keep in mind. ;)

Fantasic, as always! Though of course not for adora. I'm so happy to see razz again! And I'm happy she has made her way back to glimmer. Cant wait for more!

Awesome story! Serious heart in it. Especially with Angella saying Glimmer will make a great queen one day. Super interested in what's gonna happen in the next chapter. How about adding Madame Razz in it. 'Cause the woods outside the castle of Brightmoon. Just something to keep in mind. ;)