Can you keep up with me?

It's not "can you keep up with me."

You keep up with me!

-where did this quote come from?

What about a humor version where every master of the 5th war summons themselves or look a like
Like Rin summoning Ishtar (how has no one done this idea?)
And Illya summoning Kuro
That would be funny

PLEASEEEE UPDATEEE! Please! This is soooooo goooooooooood!

Gigguk

This is good.

I love how cheeky your Shirou is in this story, your approach was nice, not too fast or too slow, the interactions are so far very good, seeing a Shirou like yours is always heart-warming for me, I can only assume from the previews that a Shirou Muramasa vs Archer is going to happen, it would be interesting to see how EMIYA can possibly help resolve the Grail war if he could come to accept his ideals again, who knows maybe he'll open up to Shirou a little bit, but this is all hypothetical, you do you man, keep up the good work.
have a nice day!

Need more!

me encanta fic

Just love Muramasa's personality here. He's like a non-jerk ver. of Garcher: An Emiya Shirou w/ many experience (yes, including love) and teases you sometimes, but a more idealistic FGO Archer.

The idea is pretty good, but you ought to work more on the narrating and paragraphing. They're way too chunky for readers to read comfortably.

You're doing okay, but your spacing, spelling and gramnar needs a bit of work. A read-through and a second draft are recommended for all the chapters. After that, keep going. And make master! Shirou's life an interesting one.

Reeeeeeeeeee-tarded.

Writing Advice: You need to start a new paragraph whenever a new piece of dialog starts. That's writing 101. Otherwise you leave us with massive run-on paragraphs that make people want to skim, and thus miss an important bit of info, or emotional moment.

Here's an example:

"Hello." he said.

"Hey, how are you?" she replied.

Awesome

Looks like it’s mommy vs pops next... Fight! Fight! Fight!