Good to hear you alright mate, let us know if you have any problems OK, we will understand.
Now then, FUCKING EPIC CHAPTER!
The battles with the 3 Main Heroes were excellent and how the won their fights showed great development for them too, especially Ruby's fight, her learning how to use Ki was cool to see, I'm looking forward to see others learn it too. (Help teach that to the Team RWBY and allies, with Class 1A will be epic).

Now then unto Gon, what will you do I can't wait. I'm up to episode 62 on Hunter x Hunter, and so far my favorite is the Phantom Troupe Arc. I hope to see Gon friends step in the next chapter. It will be cool to see, and it will be intesting to see what Hisoka will be doing.

Till next time mate, I hope to read the next chapter for the One Piece Campaign soon I have been anxious for it mate, take care.

A thought just occurred to me, do you think that if Eri’s quirk evolves, it could resemble Orihime’s Shun Shun Rika? Both abilities revolve around rewinding/undoing an object to a few previous state, though Eri can currently only affect living organisms while Orihime can affect reality itself. Also, should Ruby get her own transformation/power up?

I don’t know why, but I got a strange feeling that Ruby’s advice to Gon when she was helping him with his homework may actually be helpful in his fight against the Deacon. I just don’t know how. I mean Gon and Killua used Zephile’s treasure hunting tips to escape Nobunaga before, so maybe her advice can help him in this situation.

Also, I hope it’s not too much to ask, but would you consider having your original characters being voiced by actual voice actors? I kind of imagined Kyoya being voiced by Kevin Michael Richardson in the way he voiced the Shredder from the 2012 series of TMNT. As for Kinpatsu, I imagine him being voiced by Matt McKenzie in the way he voiced Auron from Final Fantasy X. You can make a list of who voices who at the end of each chapter whenever a new OC is introduced. You could probably do this for Five Worlds War as well. This is entirely up to you.

All of the hype!

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previouus comment

Well yes, if Yami did truly catch up he would have annihilated the deacon quickly. Him fighting Dante at 80% makes you think he could even pose a threat and defeat a Cardinal I think.

Fortunately this is pre time skip Yami who is somewhat weaker.

It's funny how poorly my earlier comment about this Yami 'catching up' to his post timeskip self aged, but anyways, on to the chapter.

A lot of my predictions for how the fights would turn out were wrong, but I think it's better this way. Asta getting Anti-Reiki this early might be a bit OP, so just making up for his weaknesses and not just relying on his powers is a nice direction for him to go in. It also still leaves room for him to go further.

Last chapter I said Izuku's One for All wasn't as friendly for sudden power-ups, but Izuku has been training and fighting, so his limit going up does make sense. Kind of like how it was in the Overhaul arc.

And for Ruby, this was both her teaching fight AND a fight where she won with her skills, and not Silver Eyes or luck. I don't know why I didn't consider the possibility of both happening in the same fight, but I'm glad it did.

Gon though... Maybe Sojiro will throw one of those things he used to restore All Might, but if not, things aren't going to turn out that well.

I like that u used the moves off Blazblue Cross Tag Battle and I like how u gave Ruby Ki it was cool. I can’t wait to see how Gon gets back his Nen.

Alright, alright, alright! Good to hear from ya!

Hehehe...Asta realizing that "Swords should be SHARP!" made me laugh more than it should have. Still...that was nice seeing him branch out. Ruby too for that matter! Soon...ALL Huntresses will be shouting technique names! It is...Inevitable! As for Izuku...always great seeing him develop!

Oh my...Sagi's been NAUGHTY! What a surprise! You can hear the surprise in my voice...

Ehehehe! MWAHAHAHAHAHA! Oh...maybe that shouldn't be the reaction to Gon coming in at the end.

Til Next Time...Have Fun! Stay Safe!

Well, Asta, Izuku, and Ruby fight were all good, but I have to say Izuku was my favorite of the three.

Oh come one is Sagi's handwork everywhere now? Being the scientist of the Circle shouldn't be surprised he will be part of this story in someway. Will you learn about who this Black Knight is?

Oh now Gon, without his powers he can't win. What going to happen, please tell me Killua going to appear to save him best friend.

I can't wait to read what will happen next. I look forward to Hunter Hunter Nen powers being use in this please.

Loved the chapter, but I can’t tell which fight I liked more. Ruby’s development in her fight was amazing. Izuku’s scene with two of the previous users was awesome and Asta cutting the dude in two was sick. I also like the name of this chapter. I really want to see Gon do something.

Every time I hear, or in this case, read, that stupid quote about the definition of insanity, I have to fight the urge to scream, "No, it's not! Why don't you go and read a dictionary!" And I guess that I kind of failed this time given how I've left this review, but it pisses me off to no end, and I couldn't help myself.

Nice Chapter each fight showed off their weaknesses and they surpassed it. Oh looks Gon is trouble i wonder how he will succeed.

My Favourite has got Asta's though I wonder if he will get a sword one day that will let him cut through Reiki

GO BEYOND! PLUS ULTRA!

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What side is hisoka on?

WICKED CHAPTER, SO EPIC MATE!

Giving a spotlight chapter for the main supporting characters was exciting, seeing Yang, Weiss, Noelle and Yami defeating there enemies. Especially for the RWBY girls, as they haven't had many signle victories (apart with Grimm). Yang using her brains, and Weiss with Noelle using there numbers to there advantage. Yami having a decent one on one fight with a fighter who shows respect, I always love seeing that, bad guys showing respect to there enemies.

And I enjoyed Noelle and Weiss becoming friends, as I like to see them develop a sisterly relationship, like Noelle was amazed with Weiss fighting style and compared it to her mothers. She sees her as graceful and supporting older sister figure, and Weiss sees Noelle as little sister with a lot of potential.

I have some ideas for you, if you like them, feel free to use them, but I thought of some things you could add within the story (up to you if you like to use them):
- The Black Bulls reacting to the advanced technology the other worlds have...like elevator, or even a vending machine, just for jokes.
- Blake reacting when she meets Class A, that actually don't notice her cat ears as there obviously fine with distinct features on a person, something that would make Blake very happy.
- The Midnight Sun reacting to how well the non magic fighters are against them.
- Cinder anger at how she is a big fish in a small pond in compared to other worlds.
- Blake sees Adam in one of the other worlds, and yells at him for his spiteful rage against humans even extends to humans from other worlds and brings up how wrong he is.
- Zora faces Adam due to the fact, the complete foils to each other, how they let there anger lead them to different path, one where Zora in the end uses his power for wants right and Adam letting him being spiteful against everyone in his way...and also the voices of Ichigo and Grimmjow LOL!

Next chapter the three main heroes having there fights will be awesome on its own. Don't leave us waiting too long.
WOD has the 3 main heroes in there serious one on one fights against Deacons, and in FWW we have 3 or 4 fleets attacking the Holy Land, which I hope you don't leave us waiting too long for.
Take care mate and be safe!