I really really feel like Ruby, being scared but determined to become a better person...

Also, Cliff looking for the crown is so so cute!

This was BEAUTIFUL! You portrayed Ruby perfectly! I also liked how you addressed Ruby's relationship with her brothers; I never thought about how that might be awkward.

Hey, it's me again. I had some more free time, so I decided to read another of your stories.
I REALLY liked this one. Ruby isn't a character that is portrayed often, even in the books, yet she felt as realistic as any of most commonly written characters. Cliff was just adorable, too. To write characters like these isn't as easy in my opinion, so good job.
Also, Ruby's development in just this short time is as believable as her character. The end, too, gives the reader a sense of hope. Though, it is darkest before the dawn, the light shines all the clearer.
I think that's the line anyway.

well done

Beautiful.

I really enjoyed this story! Cliff was adorable and Ruby was very well written. Not many stories focus on her which is a shame.
Ruby might have won the battle for the Throne but obviously her mind has yet to accept the outcome of that night. It was interesting to watch her overcome those anxieties and self-doubt and so what she needed to do as Queen, and of course, her adorable motherly moments with Cliff :3
Anyway, great story and I can't wait to see more of what you write!

There has to be a shorthand name for the Skywing Kingdom so that I can get in some 'Dragon Muffin Patriotism!'

Good job. I honestly think that you did the speech in such a way that it was realistic, which is enough for me, and the whole Cliff thing was both awesome and cute.

If I'm going to offer any criticism, it's that you might want to cut down on the internal thinking a tad, just because that can weaken a story if one uses it too much, which I don't think you have, mind you, but just something I've seen a lot in otherwise good fanfics.

Cheers! B.