dats some thick plot bro

i love it so much keep up the good work! :)

Another trans character? Or maybe a gay or bisexual one

p.s
Great story love it so far its 2:40 (pm) now and i started at 10 (pm)

p.s (Again)
Why am i the only one commenting?

cool!

This is really, really good!

Dun dun dunnnn. The secret is out! One of the things I like about your fic is that there actually is resistance to Peril being trans from other characters. As much as I looove the fic Healed by Sandshadow9, there doesn't seem to be any characters who are uncomfortable with Flame and Umber being together. I like how your story reflects the real world in that way.

Oh our Peril is playing hero and has got a plan and everything. What could go wrong? It's hard waiting to find out, but I'll be the patient dragon and wait.

Are smotherscales actually canon? If they're not you sure do a great job of making it believable. I love how expandable the series is in fanfiction.

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This is such an amazing story AAAAAHH 3 Can't wait to read the rest of it :33

Can... can you make lemons please? ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡)

I'm loving your story! Really I think your writing is quality stuff. I have two trans sisters as well as several trans friends, and I think it's really neat how you're integrating it with not only the characters but the history and plot as well. I do have a question though. How dependant on the new Arc is this story? I've read both the Dragonets of Destiny and Darkstalker's Return arcs, but I haven't read any of the Lost Continent Arc yet. I'm currently listening to the Darkstalker prequel; I've almost finished it! Should I read the Lost Continent before continuing?

Wow nice writing

Actually Pantala has very few trees left