hilarious

This was hilarious and somehow totally believable that they'd FORGET about burying Danny's CORPSE in the WOODS!
Because they're idiots.

This is brilliant

Whoa shit! Its gold! I swear this is one of the BEST reveal stories ive read so far! Congrats! Its fantastic! Both in the basic idea and the construct of your writing! Good job! Keep it up ;D

I enjoyed reading this. It was very well written and kept me on the edge of my seat. Keep up the good work!

Actually, it's a pretty good idea. I think it could have some potential - like, if the policemen hadn't said to Danny it was his body they had found, and had tried to find out by themselve, unraveling all little by little ?

Though, even if I liked the second chapter, I think it wasn't the same atmosphere as the first and thus, it was a little disturbing. And, I don't know, I think their reactions weren't like I would have had, seeing a corpse and the ghost of a friend... but, as I said before, it was a good idea. And the first chapter was really thrilling.

(And sorry if I wrote faults, english is not my native language.)

Super trippy! It was so enjoyable I almost wish this were a multi-chapter fic. The suspense would be killer!

Really nice story! I liked the idea of them burying his body and just forgetting it, sounds like me everyday I hope you write an epilogue or more chapters with people finding out about Danny