Reviews for Doug's Slip Of The Tongue
MarioDS01 chapter 7 . 4/17
Like the others, a good ending to this story, a little sappy, but still good. And agree with another comment, that I am glad things seem to went well for Patti and Melvin/Judy, then again that part could be left open for the readers (for now).

Have something more to suggest, but I'll leave that in a PM. Once again, good stuff.
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 7 . 4/16
Very nice ending here. And good thing that the 'Melvin' plan didn't end badly.

Keep the good writing.
duskrider chapter 7 . 4/16
It's a good end for this story.
celrock chapter 7 . 4/16
Great ending. And overall, excellent rewrite of the season 3 episode, Doug’s a Big Fat Liar.

As always, keep up the great writing!
candycandy2020 chapter 7 . 4/16
me encanto el final gracias por la historia espero leer mas de esta pareja en el futuro
candycandy2020 chapter 6 . 4/14
muy buen capitulo sobre la teoria de Patti me gusta la idea no puedo esperar para leer el siguiente capitulo
MarioDS01 chapter 6 . 4/14
Guess we should not be surprised Judy would do something like this with her plan to help Patti.

Also funny, what you said in the note in the end of this chapter actually crossed my mind, might have as well with other readers, and what you said with other fans in the past. Personally this would be a great set-up of a possible relationship between those characters, but this story is more focused on Doug and Connie. But who knows, maybe a possible fanfiction of the couple, a sequel/spin-off?

Until then, I look forward to the rest of this story!
oscuro oscuro chapter 6 . 4/13
Buen capítulo y se acerca el final
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 6 . 4/13
Yep, leave it to Judy to go through extreme measures that would be considered insane for anyone else.

Keep the good writing
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 5 . 4/2
Very nice one here.

Keep the good writing.
candycandy2020 chapter 5 . 4/2
gran capitulo me encanto la secuencia de fantasia de Doug me muero por saber que planea Judy
MarioDS01 chapter 5 . 4/2
Was unsure of the dream since it seemed so clique (or whatever the word/term is), but it actually in a way makes sense what's going on in Doug's world.

Glad the movie date with Connie went really well and Doug is liking Connie more and more and having no real regrets of his mistake.

Still like Doug (maybe others), I feel bad for Pattie as well, but now I am curious what Judy's plan might be to fix this. Seems suggestive, but could be reading it wrong. We will have to wait and find out in future chapters...
oscuro oscuro chapter 5 . 4/2
Buen capítulo
MarioDS01 chapter 4 . 3/3
Great chapter. Glad Doug did not take all of his sister's advice to heart, except with suggesting the date at the theater, which is the movies instead of a play, but still good.

Nice talk with Skeeter giving actually good advice to Doug to consider.

Also do look forward to the next fantasy, a little more then the date, but still look forward to that date.
diamondsnow chapter 4 . 3/3
I liked the chapter I can not wait for the next doug fantasy sequence sounds interesting
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