WoW thank you very much for writing this wonderful fanfic, at the moment I am reading and writing this, in the Pokémon series they went back to the characters almost to the beginning (or worse) so all the maturity that some characters had gained and developed ( mainly Ash) they were passed by the -... Well you understand. So this season's conclusion is a much-needed breath of fresh air. I hope that more writers will follow your example and finally let those children grow

I wish you would consider making this a two-shot story or making a sequel to this for them admitting their feelings of love to each other.

Yaaay love it!

This is a really nice retelling of that infamous scene in XYZ. The narrative is fluid and the character interactions stay satisfyingly true to the anime. I particularly like the idea of Ash realising his feelings as soon as he is put in a position like this for the first time.

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Um... I'm partial to this fic... It is well written... but if you hadn't written it, I might have never known Ash was ever kissed by Serena xOx I'm just too old school (or too old period), I don't follow XYZ. I hope to read more AAML fics from you

Good fic. And a very mature take on things (which is rare in fanfiction). I hope that it gets 1 more follow up chapter of Ash and Misty.

~Elsil

Pokeshippings rules yay! Good work!

Woo! I did NOT see this one coming from you, had to admit, I was a bit scared since it sounded familiar to me...anyhow! I like what did here with Ash coming to a revelation in that moment. Thoroughly was stunned — and cheered — when Ash stopped Serena the way he did.

Yes, yes, YES! THANK YOU! Got anymore like this?

I agree with you about Serena, she's not right for Ash.
Nice oneshot, I hope you keep 'em coming and that's the ship in your new story too.
Are you participating in pokeshipping week by any chance? I hope you are.

The date location I suggest cerulean cape should be a surprise that ash has in mind and once she and ash arrive there she will be surprised but also very happy

Please make the reunion of ash and Misty happen after he leaves kalos and returns home once he arrives he finds a suprise that misty was waiting for him with his mother (like how misty was waiting for ash after he may and max went their separate ways and she was waiting for ash at his house) he Rush's over to misty as they say each other with tears of joy and give each other a hug and tell each other how they been doing and what they both been up to since they last saw each other and how they noticed how much they grown and matured since they last saw each other and as for how ash and Misty should tell each other their feelings for each other ash should ask her out on a date which will be a shock to her but make her very happy and the place he thinks of taking her so that they can confess is the one place misty always wanted to go with her future lover and share her romantic moments with under the stars during the full moon is cerulean cape a place where lovers or couples go to for a romantic date I remember misty saying she always wanted to go there with her special someone and can have fun share their special time together and share her first kiss with after telling her feelings to him that special someone is ash ash and Misty deserve a true romantic happy ending please make thins happen after all this time they deserve it these two truly love each other with all their hearts and souls since they first met it's love at first sight and like the old saying long distance makes the heart grow fonder meaning their love for each other will be strong then it has ever been since they didn't see each other in years