Reviews for Clean Up
Nik chapter 7 . 4/12
Every time I read your stories I end up smiling like an idiot! I loved this chapter ️ You write them so we'll! Looking forward to your other Karmiro stories
BackTheBlue chapter 1 . 6/20/2019
I hope to see more of love stories between Hiro and Karmi
seireidoragon chapter 7 . 4/22/2019
This was a nice continuation of the series. I really hope we get more of Karmi in season 2!
Guest 1 chapter 7 . 2/18/2019
Great job! This fanfic was honestly very interesting to read and really cute. I can't wait to see what else you have for us!
GojiraCipher chapter 7 . 2/17/2019
I've read the entire thing and I really enjoyed it. With each chapter focusing on different themes and the struggles they're feeling from Granville feeling regret, Honey Lemon feelings for Tadashi, and Baymax, which I felt you're written him well.

I especially love the last chapter. Sure we'll probably won't have an official episode like this for a long time, but I hope if Hiro and Karmi have a moment, to understand one another, at least a starting point, it will be something like this.

I look forward to what else you have planned. But I suggest adding in the description that your BH6 fanfictions are canon to each other, I was confused at first when Karmi spoke about Christmas.
Fichistory chapter 7 . 2/10/2019
You used to have my curiosity, now you have my attention. I loved this story and personally this chapter. I found it very cute as you write this two and I can see them as friends or more in the future. I loved this scene in the dirigible, I really imagine everything flowing in this way. You have a bonus with me for the fact that when Karmi was confronted, she actually tried to defend herself not just stood there like a defenseless maiden. And I saw the re-reference you made to your Christmas story, I hope this year is better and thanks for writing this story.
lelcar chapter 7 . 2/10/2019
Very cute and in-character interaction between Karmi and 'Captain Cutie'. I like specially how you play elements: Karmi's insecurities, Hiro being protective and at the same time vulnerable, the awkwardness and denial between the both of them, etc...
Also, the detail of Karmi using a strenght enhancer like Hiro did once, and facing the same drawbacks as him.

Fridge brillance: How quickly "Captain Cutie" appears to save Karmi from the muggers. It has been established in canon Hiro pays atttention to Karmi's routine, so it would make sense he would keep an eye on her while leaving school in case of trouble.
Iamaddictedtocoffee chapter 6 . 2/8/2019
I love this so much
lelcar chapter 6 . 2/2/2019
Hiro and Karmi in a blimp? You really know how to keep your reader's attention :)
Someperson chapter 5 . 2/1/2019
I LOVED THIS SOOOOO MUCH! It was so heartfelt and beautifully written, and I believe you captured the way everyone interacts with others perfectly. This is definitely one of those stories I'm gonna have reread repeatedly till it's ingrained in my brain. Heck, I might just ingrave it on the backs ofy eyelids.
Emeliaelsaelise chapter 5 . 1/15/2019
I loved it! Can't wait for more! :)
Heroes of the Shadows chapter 4 . 12/30/2018
Did I just find a story I like about a fandom I love that’s actually recent?! Woah
Puterboy1 chapter 4 . 12/8/2018
You need to work with the show’s writers, given your levels of maturity.
Emeliaelsaelise chapter 4 . 12/8/2018
I loved this chapter! Like a whole lot. I'll be her for chapters to come, you're an amazing writer! :D keep it up
All Things Animated chapter 3 . 11/3/2018
There’s a mistake in this chapter. Instead saying, “where you could hear a pin drop”, you should have said, “it was so quiet you could hear a pin drop”. You also forgot to capitalize the first letter in that sentence. Other than that, good job.
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