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See it's the dialogue that gets me. Everyone loves good dialogue, and those two don't get the bromance they deserve most times.

Sheesh. Touji's coming up with tactics. Why ain't he lead? D

Who the hell are these two and why would good men rough 'em up in broad daylight? Sounds like...plot convenience. Ahh...more like Girlfriend of Steel. Gotcha.

Yeah. Definitely love the dialogue especially between the girls.

Please, like we didn't see that coming. That angel is a jerk...he loves screwing with people I swear.

Or maybe it's Mari who loves screwing with people...how old are these people!?

OK I'm back. Let's see the insanity unfold!

Okay that unfolded differently than expected, but he's right. Kensuke has studied a lot of theory. Might as well turn that into experience.

can you update this new chapter soon, it will become even more exciting.

I like how you're using characters and settings from a lot of different Evangelion universes such as the unamed Angel from the First Imperssion game. I wonder are you going to bring in the last 2 Eva pilots Kotone Suzunami and Maria Vincennes as well as Mayumi Yamagishi and the Insubstantial Angel. There are also the Eva units α and β from the Battle Orchestra game that could be useful. I hope you decide to use the non-show named Angels Shateiel, Turel, Baraqijal, Iblis, Adovaquiel, Atalibu, Azrael, and Zefon.

I'm gonna be that asshole and ask you to please update this story~

It could do with some proofreading but that is my only point against it. Everything else is just right, IMHO.

Best writing to you,

Interesting turn of events, can't wait to see what you do next.

Excellent scene with Shinji and Asuka.

A lemon doesn't have to be overly graphic to be effective for the reader. It was a good first attempt.

I found the nightmare scene to be very well written. it gave a view of her unresolved feelings and the fear that are holding them back from surfacing.

I am enjoying the story line you have constructed. The pairings are good, if not obvious but I think they work all around. I hope Shinji, steps up like the characters has been re-presenting himself to everyone in his second chance.

I did notice a few words were missing letters or incorrect apostrophes.

Nice work overall.

I was enjoying this as a fun silly ride, but Shinji telling Kensuke to buy Rei a ring made me pull my parachute cord.

Interesting switch up of characters and story line. I look forward to seeing how this progresses further.

I like how it's more complex, and she doesn't just fall head over heels for him, idk, good so far, excited for more

I was hesitant to read this, but I'm really glad i did. Well written and the story moved forward well.

Nice work.

now this is the Evangelion story that worth every penny and time I have to spend reading! please don't forget about the updates... once I found a great story my little sister usually would ask me to pestering the author about when the next chapter due, I'll be waiting... keep up the good work