please update the story

it did ty :)
also ty for the enjoyable read

Good character

My theory is that Saber’s appetite is due to the fact The largest chunk of a dragon trait is in her stomach. Considering she is producing The same amount of energy as on, it makes sense he has to eat like one.
With all the extra weight going to her Lancer class forms’s assets.

Love the shopping trip scene.

I wonder how everyone will react to the fact Hakuno essentially has two A ranked hotties claiming that they’re married to her, or Close to that level romantically.

Actually Ruby is 3cm taller then Artoria, and 7 Cm talker then Nero. According to the wiki. Then again it’s dark, and moving instantly. So A margin of error of an inch or two in that statement is to be expected.

Lastly I think Saber lili and ruby would get along famously. They both itemize and dream about heroes the same way, both young female prodigies in terms of combat, both 15, have a similar body type, both love cookies, and both are innocent pure souls, but willing to walk down a path that Will leave them forever changed just to protect innocent people.

Interesting

I was going to comment on the power level of servants, but yay I can see some like Qrow taking down a caster or a assassin with E or D ranked states. Especially if they don’t use there NP.

Interesting choice for a four servant.
Saber lili might not be the strongest servant, and would be considered a little redundant with Nero around. However, I have to give you points for originality, saber lili could have some interesting conversations with Nero and Ruby, and she does help round out their team nicely.

Hakuno- The strategist, unifier, and uses support abilities.
Tamamo- Flexibility in combat, her mirror can be used as a shield, and can act as a healer. Her tags give her a wide range of different elemental attacks.
Nero- Close range combat specialist and currently strongest member of the team. due to her imperial privilege Skill and thrice rising sun Nero can adapt to and outlast any opponents. Add in her NP can essentially cross or widen any strength gap in Nero’s favor, and make escape impossible only supports my claims.
Saber lili- she might not be as strong or wise as her other counterparts, but she still a solid addition to the team. She is strong enough, skilled enough, and has right abilities To be on even ground with Nero at her best. Lili is also the best at making friends out of call her different versions, which is something they need. Plus she processes a powerful anti-units NP that would be handy and taking down a really powerful enemy, or massive number of them.

Lastly I feel sorry for any male opponent see she designs to fire her laser at. Considering it as a track record in hitting the family jewels.

I can't say I'm too surprised that Tamamo would say what she did the end of this chapter, I mean, take a look at what happened to her! She was exposed as a kitsune and, in the type moon verse, falsely accused of poisoning the Japanese emperor by a Buddhist monk who had come to try to discern what the cause of said emperor's sudden illness was. It makes sense that she would warn Blake about keeping her own secrets from the rest of her team for too long.

Nice battle, can’t wait to see how team HATN’s next mission goes!

...Was that Shiro?
Also, thanks for your continued support. What did you think about the two characters I introduced in the last chapter?
Volume 2 has ended in my fic, but I'm making a bonus chapter.
I'm excited to start volume three. As soon as I finish Code Vein. The game is awesome.

A satisfying battle, and the first real fight where Hakuno and her Servants fight together. Hakuno is a bit inexperienced, commanding multiple Servants at once that is. She’s only had to give orders and support a single Heroic Spirit throughout the entire Holy Grail War, so this battle should help her develop her skills.

Yes yes it does love it

Oh boy...a figure in red and black...someone who won't give his name showing up out of nowhere claiming to be on Salem's side...Nameless Archer, sanjou.

Hope to see more updates soon!

I’m thinking Hakuno needs another ranged support Servant. An Archer preferably, Nameless seems appropriate, but even someone like Ishtar (Rin) or Tomoe Gozen seems acceptable as or someone who is well versed in healing, like Medea Lily or Nightingale.

Generally speaking Lily can’t use it as it was meant purely for Excalibur I believe. Hope you plan on keeping Pryhha alive. Honestly think Oum would’ve left her alive if he hadn’t died after Volume 2.

Interesting, Ozpin always knows too much for comfort, but calling Hakuno by her title is oddly specific. Must be knowledge gained from the relics.

Always appeciate a new chapter of this story. It’s true that to hide the capabilities of the Servants, the Heroic Spirits have to hold back and Hakuno needs to watch the management of her od to them/spiritrons of the Regalia to them. Surprised she even knew how to do that, but maybe the Regalia taught her.