| Reviews for Observer Effect |
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   Bvadams chapter 5 . 3/21 Old boy needs to build the damn suit already |
| SkyWorthy chapter 5 . 10/1/2019 I love this story |
| Melodiosa chapter 5 . 6/6/2019 Oh please update! I really love your story! Please please please please please... |
| The Fangirl of Awesome Stuff chapter 5 . 5/2/2019 Hello again! I was delighted to see this updated, and enjoyed re-reading the old and first reading the new. Thank your for the update! Ooh things are heating up. I cannot wait to see how Tony interacts with the other avengers. Just Bruce and Natasha have been so exciting! Can’t wait for more! |
| Josnika chapter 1 . 4/8/2019 Great story so far, please don't forget to finish it, lol. Loving it |
| Mister En chapter 5 . 11/22/2018 You have a very promising story that I can't wait to finish. But, a few things. I cannot seem to find any grammatical errors, so that's a great thing. However, the tense keeps going back and forth. Like, the first chapter is in the present tense, then it jumps to past tense for a couple chapters, and then abruptly shifts back to the present in the MIDDLE OF THE CHAPTER! That sort of thing pisses me off and makes for very bad reading. But, the rest of the story is very entertaining. Well paced, most stories either give really boring information that readers already know about or very little of it that it confuses them. Your story is an even balance that makes it enjoyable. The language is clear and your structure is sound! This will be a great story. Keep up your good work. Can't wait for more! |
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/16/2018 Great story can't wait for chapter 6. |
| Rune Saint chapter 5 . 10/4/2018 Love it. |
| MaxSlayer chapter 5 . 10/4/2018 honestly just started today and was fun. Its one of the best avengers fic out there. hope to see more |
| Rune Saint chapter 4 . 10/2/2018 This is FANTASTIC! |
| Mimeomia chapter 2 . 9/29/2018 To be honest, I got bored. I couldn't care less about obadia's whole process of getting to his office and it got really hard not to insta drop the story the moment you started listing tony's kitchen appliances. Anyway, maybe i'll try this again some day. |
| Mimeomia chapter 1 . 9/29/2018 It's good! BUT, I think there's too much unnecessary details, like, who gives a fuck about what his cup is made of? Or when someone uses a napkin? It gives me the impression that the story will be boring, filled with useless details, tons tony's new eyes (Cringy but maybe it's too soon to tell, reminds me too much of clasis OP HP fics) And I can't really tell when Tony died. Cap killed him? or left to die at least? end of civil war? |
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/23/2018 Lovely like where this is going Hope its Tony and Pepper and Bruce and Natasha later on |
| theawsomest5 chapter 4 . 9/24/2018 SOOOO GOOOOD |
| jumping-jo chapter 4 . 9/24/2018 bruce is so wary of tony, i kinda like that but sad tony didn't get him to be his science bestie really curious how tony deals with natasha |
