I was in too much of a hurry to right anything before as I wanted to read the sequel but now that I've read it and it seems to be unfinished I am back. I love this book, it is an amazing idea you have here with the magical kingdom an all.

OMG! O M G! There is a bird here who is named Merlin and Merlin was wearing a ring with that on it but at the same time Arthur also already knows that the person that was in his chamber was Emrys and and we know that Embrys and Merlin are the same! Aagh! He actually knows Merlin already! He knows the ring and if he sees it again he will know that Merlin is the warlock who was in his room and aaaaaaaagh! Damn it Merlin! You shouldn't have gone to his chambers! :'D

Really great story! Thank you xD

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I really like the ideas you have, although I have to admit that your lack of experience as a writer really shows. Interesting plot, but not well written. I would love to see you rewrite this one day when you have more experience writing.

Wonderfully written story!

This was honestly great. I loved how things went for the most part. Did you kinda make me want Merlin and Mergause to get together? Yes. Am I sad she died and it was not fulfilled? No. Considering the same thing happened on the series with Merlin and Morgana imo where they had so much chemistry yet it was squandered due to I believe the showrunners not wanting Mergana to overshadow Arwen(which imo was a pile of dogshit due to how much they imo ruined Gwen and reduced her to a toollove interest after season 2)

Anyways onwards to your next fic.(Also can I say the whole homosexuality that was brought in I normally don't like due to the way its normally portrayed and done but I think I can safely say you didn't use it in a way that was cringey, devalued the characters or story or anything like that so props to you!)

Wait one meal. Does he get water once a week aswell cause I'm pretty sure 3 days without it and you dead. So basically Uther is actually a psycho who kills his own subjects even when they come straight to him. Damn... Actually you know what that's actually pretty accurate to the show. The guy was a classic ruler who wasn't progressive but fought for his kingdom and kept it as safe as possible he wasn't benevolent like Arthur but he wasn't exactly like the Sarrum. But when it came to magic the dude deffo became crazy.. So you know what props to you ma dude.

Not to not pick cause I do enjoy this fic but isn't blue fire much more hotter than that of orange fire. At least that's what I've been taught that at least in theory the colour requires a higher temp.

But Merlins dathee is currently alive so surely this wouldnt work. See this is the problem with time travel everything gets so confusing

Loved it

yes, I too would like to spend an undefined amount of time as a tree.

I LOVED THIS! Its a brilliant story line that doesn't completely undone and ignore what Merlins been through and DRAGONS! sorry I love them. And I just I'm not sure how to fully tell you how amazing this all is

I loved this! I can’t wait for Merlin to get to Camelot and what’s going to change! I’m going to promptly scurry off to read the sequel! ;D

OK usually I don’t review, But now that I know that this is your first story, I have to. I just want you to know that you are amazing. I look forward to reading every chapter. There can be minor tweaks, like character development, but I really think you are a great at what you do .