You write very well and I love your portrayal of Remus. My heart goes out to him for his constant round of evictions.
And I especially loved the sympathy and kindness shown to him by Tom...the hot chocolate and the hand on the shoulder were very good touches.
Can't wait to see Remus and Harry's adventures together!

Again I absolutely love the innocence of Harry, that you have managed to capture. I can't wait to read more

This is an interesting premise, I am intrigued in seeing where it goes, I believe that you have captured the childlike quality perfectly in Harry and the story seems to be very promising. I look forward to reading more

Intriguing beginning and from your summary this sounds like it'll be fun. Looking forward to seeing where it goes. Little Harry with Mr Goggles is adorable (his 'small friend' pressed close to his body...aw!) :D