Reviews for All New Double D (Story Rewrite) |
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derekctomlinson chapter 3 . 6/5 a pissed off lee hissing at nazz and kevin i see that miss cheerleader is too good to hangout with anyone but mr bully jock and speaking of jockass if i ever hear about you hitting any of the eds i will use you as a punching bag and my sisters will deal with miss pompom |
burrage42 chapter 3 . 6/5 I enjoyed reading this chapter. If you don't mind me asking who will be paired with double d because in the summary you said may but this chapter you have her in a relationship. |
godofmadness43 chapter 3 . 6/5 nice, love the rewrite for this |
Kourtney Uzu Yato chapter 3 . 6/5 Glad to see your update, I missed this story. It's rather fitting, I always felt that Edd was the best, Ed just needs to be led in the right direction with better influences while Eddy is a total prick that deserves his ass-kicking. I can't wait to see how you write this. Keep up the great work. |
Rictor Yagami chapter 1 . 6/22/2019 I decided to read this story again. I read it before but didn't review it the first time. When I first saw this I was like "Ah man! Not another rewrite!" But then I saw you still had the original story up so I was curious to see where this one would go as the beginning is different and so were a few other things that you added. I'm also sorry to bother with this question but when will you update your other story's? I would like to see A Man Amoung Men and Naruto the Next God of Shinobi Book 2 updated when you can. Sorry I've just been wanting to know what will happen next. Hope to see a little more of this as well. Good Luck Dragon6. |
OmniUIShaggyOverexaggerated chapter 2 . 3/31/2019 The cul de sac kids have all grown up and changed, most for the better and some for the worst. Sarah has a job, cut all ties with Jimmy, who's been identified as a human leech and the boy is no longer living in Peach Creek. Kevin and Nazz are a couple. Ed and Eddy haven't changed much, especially the latter who only became worse with passing time. For crying out loud, he's become a smoker. Won't be surprised if he catches Lung cancer eventually. Johnny has become an introvert, with Plank no longer in his life, and Sarah is the only person he'll talk to. I don't see Rolf anywhere. What about the Kanker sisters? |
OmniUIShaggyOverexaggerated chapter 1 . 3/31/2019 Double D has definitely changed, like his intellect and physiology are evenly balanced. His love of inventing hasn't disappeared at all. Now that he's back at Peahc Creek, I wonder how much the other cul de sac kids have changed, especially Ed and Eddy, the latter whom Edd had a fallout with before he left for Arizona with his uncle Richard. What about the Kankers? |
Domic787 chapter 2 . 3/18/2019 I like it hope to see more soon man this is interesting |
godofmadness43 chapter 2 . 3/17/2019 nice rewrite, glad that things changed so that it explains more of what's going on |
snoopykid chapter 2 . 3/17/2019 Awesome job! I liked your story before, but this is good too! |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/26/2018 I honestly got confused I didn’t know you wrote both stories, I loved the first one and this one seemed better than the first in one chapter |
bleach103 chapter 1 . 9/17/2018 i read the old story i was wondering why you stop but i just read this and i hope to read more |
God of the Valiant chapter 1 . 9/10/2018 the old story was pretty interesting and the new stories first chapter was pretty good it definitely caught my interest. Keep up the good work. |
Cenobite chapter 1 . 9/8/2018 I really like that you are redoing this. I do hope that in this one you do explain what happened to make him have to leave to his uncle's home. I can't wait for more. |
godofmadness43 chapter 1 . 9/8/2018 well, glad to see this story is coming back |