| Reviews for Even As |
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VengetheSith chapter 5 . 6/11 Oof. I did NOT expect that. Sidious is PURE EVIL! I love the story so far, so please continue. |
Helivye chapter 3 . 3/5 I knew it but godam it, it still hurts to see Obi treated like that. oh you write so well it's giving me chills of disgust |
Helivye chapter 2 . 3/5 what are they doing that is so uncivilised to my poor babe? you're making me thinking about the worst. |
anon chapter 5 . 8/15/2019 This is incredible! You make it seem so real, despite the fact that we're looking from Obi-Wan's perspective, who is not quite there anymore. I both love this story for how good it is and hate it for what it's doing to my favourite. I hope you update this sometime, and if not thank you for this part anyway. You are a great writer. |
Crow T. Author chapter 5 . 8/2/2019 I hope you're going to continue this story. I just finished reading it again and came here to see if maybe there would be another chapter. *sigh* You are in my favorite authors list, so I know I would be notified. But, I can always hope I missed the email or the notification app isn't working! Anyway, please continue this one! |
stuffabtstars chapter 5 . 4/29/2019 dear lord of fuk this is so god damn good adshafklfjdauidohjkadf |
Come to Darkside chapter 4 . 11/15/2018 I am as obsessed as palpatine to turn obi to the darkside too lol |
Come to Darkside chapter 5 . 11/14/2018 Whoaaa this is the kind of obi wan torture and turning to dark side i've been looking for! Please continue this story, pleaseee. I want to know more! |
colored0rain chapter 5 . 10/19/2018 NO! Not my Obi! Wait where did that come from. |
julzdagger88 chapter 5 . 10/19/2018 Love how “Master your eyes” keeps coming up - I really like how you write Obi-Wan in this story- you can feel his confusion and just how hurt, tortured, despaired he is by his scattered thoughts... somehow you’re making me kinda feel bad for Anakin... even though he’s the one who killed everyone. I like how he’s being kind to Obi-Wan. I really hope they survive this! And that Sidious dies a horrible death! |
julzdagger88 chapter 3 . 10/19/2018 You are such a talented writer! In this chapter, I love the imagery and the way you write Obi-Wan’s feelings and train of thoughts... it’s so convincing and you can totally understand what he’s going through (poor Obi!). I think my favorite part is this sentence: "Perhaps," The Sith was breathless, "Dooku was right about you." It’s such a powerful line and feel like it’s a turning point for Sidious’s plans for Vader/ Obi-Wan. Please continue! |
julzdagger88 chapter 4 . 9/29/2018 Love the imagery... it’s so descriptive and expressive. Poor Obi! Another great chapter! |
supernova01 chapter 4 . 9/23/2018 I really like how you wrote Obi-Wan's vision/fever dream. It was great how you transitioned from the dream to reality. I am also glad that members of his lineageQui-Gon and Dooku both made appearances. Qui-Gon to say goodbye and Dooku to welcome him into the ways of the Sith. And yet Obi-Wan is still fighting not to be a Sith. Love this! |
CheshireCat333 chapter 3 . 9/16/2018 Oh dear...this is just too absolutely devastating. The depravity of Sidious...I have no words. |
supernova01 chapter 3 . 9/15/2018 Intense! Looking forward to the next episode... |