| Reviews for Invincible |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 7/28/2019 The raw emotion in this piece, the tension, the soft, sweet love - God, this gave me real feelings. I swear I felt Lily's yearning early, then once they're together and "You whisper sweet words to me when we're leaning against each other, waiting for class to start. You kiss my temple with so much affection that your friends pretend to gag and we laugh because they just don't understand" my heart hurt again, but in a good way this time. And the emotions kept going and going and going and "I hope you know that nothing will deter me from loving you for the rest of my life." My heart hurts Petals, it's going to take all day for me to recover from the beauty and emotion you've created 3 |
 Ashspren chapter 1 . 12/17/2018 I loved this so much... It was fluffy, yet so passionate at the same time. Your writing style is incredible, and this is beautifully written. Thank you so much for this fic. 3 |
| TrueHomiePiP chapter 1 . 9/22/2018 I love how you changed it up a little for this one :) I really enjoy when writers explore their writing range a little, even though I already love your usual style! great job! this was a wonderful read \o/ |
| eliminaaado chapter 1 . 9/6/2018 I'm glad you're so impulsive and just went like a shot to write this, I wish I could come up with something like this in 6 hours |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/5/2018 Very soothing |
| DancingStars45 chapter 1 . 9/5/2018 Damn this was like a warm hug |
| em38 chapter 1 . 9/4/2018 Ahh this is absolutely adorable 3 I love their push pull your writing is so gorgeous! |
| golden fairy lights chapter 1 . 9/1/2018 *sighs* its amazing and so so beautiful |
| AMProngs chapter 1 . 8/31/2018 Sweet! |
| natalie.ana chapter 1 . 8/30/2018 this was so sweet! fantastic job as usual petals xxx |
| Kirsty chapter 1 . 8/30/2018 Like you I am awake when I should be asleep, but when I saw you had a new story, I just had to. And I'm glad I did. It's amazing. Thank you. |
| Moon Monkeys chapter 1 . 8/30/2018 This is one of the best written fics I've ever read. I really love it 3 3 3. Great job for making another brilliant read Petals |
| YouBlitheringIdiot chapter 1 . 8/30/2018 Beautiful, petals! Such a beautiful tone to this fic and do bloody touching and sweet, I loved it and the idea of the mixed couple? Wow, stunningly good and I want more, you’re too damned good! ;)))))))))))))) |
| AustenNi chapter 1 . 8/30/2018 Such nice story! Loved it!xx |
| inakindofdaydream chapter 1 . 8/30/2018 ummmmmmmmmm petals you are a divine jily queen and i love you (also look at my snazzy new account) |
