Reviews for That Awful Snape Boy
Vadimmom chapter 12 . 7/26
Very much enjoying your story. Lily and Severus’s relationship is very well done. It’s natural and believable.
Kawisdom chapter 12 . 7/22
I wish Minerva had picked someone who didn't have so much history with Severus to help him.
Professor SS19 chapter 3 . 7/20
I have a lot of emotions at this chapter which I cannot accurately articulate but I also just need to go beat up Horace Slughorn for being such a rubbish teacher and then I'll come back to read Chapter 4...
Professor SS19 chapter 2 . 7/20
1. I love the 'Sev paradox.'
2. I felt Severus' pain and rage in this chapter and it was wonderful, in the, "I really felt that, well written" kind of wonderful way.
3. I really, really liked the interaction in Albus' office (unsurprisingly) - especially liked how he tried to build trust with Severus and some sort of bond.
4. I laughed, aloud, at the 'I don't eat children, only lemon drops' line which I realise may not have been your intention in such a serious moment, but I have a dark sense of humour and imagined little children wrapped up in plastic like lemon drops are and Albus popping them in his mouth as he talks to a shocked Severus.
Overall I loved it, and I am looking forward to reading more!
Professor SS19 chapter 1 . 7/20
I already love this, and I am excited to read on! Lovely characterisation, well planned dialogue, setting up an interesting premise.
PearlM21 chapter 12 . 7/11
Really enjoying this. Please continue. It's really nice to see someone taking care of hi. I want to see how things develop.
PearlM21 chapter 5 . 7/11
"Horace was never really considered, let's be honest." was a very amusing line, that made me laugh out loud. True. Very True.
PearlM21 chapter 2 . 7/11
I really liked how you portrayed Dumbledoor in this chapter. He's so good with kids. He got the point across without screaming at him or anything.
Severus-Loki-Sirius-Firestar chapter 12 . 7/8
This is great, love it. Update soon please!
projektrevolution20 chapter 12 . 7/6
Yay another chapter!
Janelight chapter 12 . 7/4
Poor Severus! I'm glad he and MM are making headway in their guardian relationship though. And that JP is showing some compassion. Thanks for the update!
Mojito737 chapter 12 . 7/3
Lovely chapter as always! Severus is just done with parenting XD
RebeccaRoy chapter 12 . 7/3
Wow, poor Severus, he is still so skittish and it is to be expected how his life has been so far. Though now no-one dares touch him at all as he has a fierce lioness on his side.
BlueWater5 chapter 12 . 7/3
Nicely written portrayal of Snape feeling betrayed and James' feeling of shame.
RainCityWriter chapter 11 . 6/23
Great story, I love how you characterize the people and especially how you handle Snape, making him the gray person that he is, but also sympathetic. Excellent work.
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