Okay, that's pretty adorable. This is a very interesting premise, between the blind boy and the deaf girl and having them communicate like that and bonding over it. I like the way Neo's personality comes through; even though Fox can't see her, I can still picture her facial expressions perfectly.

Great story, please update again soon

I like how these characters interact, but it feels like too much monologue at times.

That was adorable and hilarious, I love it.

If someone had asked me what my life was missing 20 minutes ago i would have been very very wrong

Sad part is, you can do this by knocking, or even just tapping someones hand or shoulder to comunicate privately

Awww Im glad David and Gwen work at a proper camp now

Reading from Fox's pov is engaging and fun, Scarlets jokes land and their friendship is enjoyable to read, they have good chemistry together. Neo however is a real treat (pun not intended) I love how well shes written and how even though it isnt described how she reacts cause Fox cant see it, we the audience can absolutely see her smug face and amusement through her dialogue. You did an excellent job with this first chapter, cant wait to read more

David and Gwen huh? I know that's on purpose, there literally no other way that's no on purpose.

Not knocking it just admiring the fact that it's a thing happening in this Camp AU.

cute. well written. funny, and you caught the spirit of Neo pretty well. you've earned a follower

Anything with Fox and Neo will have my attention. Can't wait to see this grow.