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I enjoyed reading this.

Nice job here, and yeah, Kimi would notice this.

Keep the good writing.

Interesting start and perspective. I like how you write from 1st POV as well. Very nicely done and gives us some foreshadowing into a possible story line of redemption. Very interesting. I'm curious to see what you do with this

-SP

Nice story. I like how Kimi is able to see deep down into the gang's souls in terms of what they're really like on the inside, despite what they might show on the outside.

Great one here, and keep up the great writing!

Loved it, well done.
Keep up the writing when you can.