Is there a chance for a sequel? Because dayum, I would love to see more of tiny Weiss-I mean Whitley, interacting with the rest of the cast, maybe even Winter at some point, who knows? All I know is that this is good, and I want more of it.

This is great! I would love to see a sequel!

The worse alternative of "ignore that bad joke" is editing "shit" over the same picture.

Ayyy! A story where Whitley is more than just a little jerk! It's nice to see him as Weiss' little brother, and not just a mini Schnee/Jacques Clone.

This was great, and I truly enjoyed it. I now want to go find my own little brother (who's not that little anymore), and give him a big hug.

Man this has been one amazing journey! From the bottom of my heart I truly hope this gets a sequel.

The little detail of Whitley being disturbed by Schrodinger's cat is very humanizing.

So yeah, Jacques's problem with Whitley is that he's not assertive enough. Which is why he hasn't rebelled yet. A bit self-defeating there, Jacques.

I really wasn't expecting this to end with Whitley ending up with them, but it really makes sense in context.
That ending paragraph was great.

I like how Whitley has Ruby and Yang teasing each other to show him a more functional sibling relationship.

Yay, very brief, accepting mention of Ruby possibly being asexual! Sweet!

Part of the tragedy here is that Whitley is totally right that he's probably better-prepared than Weiss or Winter to run a business, but he's still an asshole, and his father is still being abusive about how he's "raising" him and training him.

The interaction with Yang was kind of fascinating.

Yay! They talked! Still hoping this happens in canon!

I've always loved your characterization. Whitley's panic attacks, anxiety, and overly-stressed nature really came through here. And I LOVED his perspective on Weiss and her team.

Man this has been one amazing journey! From the bottom of my heart I truly hope this gets a sequel.

Hopefully there will be more, just to see what will happen now. I mean Whitely meeting the Belladonnas, and immeditaly adopted by Kali, Winter finding out, and the rest of Atlas... And of course seeing him and Ruby geek out together.

I didn't think I would actually comment on this but, well.

YANG WHAT THE HECK.

The not-so-odd part about it is that that is definitely a joke Yang would do.

Please sign here to pick up your certified bro hood upon becoming a man:
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That was actually interesting and quite lovely.