I really hope this isn't abandoned, I'd love to see where this goes.

Yep, just as I thought, extra people turned good idea to shit.

yer i recon clones where killed if hurt but i mena a clone with combat experience and cloned bodies with no soul/persanlity/training could be used as spare parts as you making a clone anyway why not save money make some as body parts for proven troopers? i would

This is a great read! What happened to the season trooper?

love the story so far! Excited for the next update. Only thing I have as a constructive criticism is to make sure you don't make Harry OP. With both magic and typical force techniques to use, it's easy to make him over powered, just remembered that even the Jedi need clone troops with them to fight a droid army and, and that some kinds of droids can give them a lot of trouble. Try to keep harry in range of that, with a little more power because of his magic. Your story is still amazing, but stories where the main characters aren't over powered are always more interesting to read and from experience, write.

Hm, I wonder with Dudley, his friends, and Harry's appearance will this be enough to cause dissension between Anakin and Palpatine aka Sidious?

I know this is a T rated story, but is there any plans for a friendship that's deeper than normal like Harry and Ahsoka maybe?

I'm gonna be honest I didn't think this would be any good, bit you surprised me, it's actually quite a good concept that I haven't heard of before and you writing style for its really good. I hope you keep up with it, to many good unfinished stories.

What have you guys gotten yourself into!?

Awesome, update soon.

Good start, no so sure about all the extra oc but will see where you take em.

Nice

Good so far.
As a tip, need a separstion between scenes. Got confused when out of nowhere switched to fight below w/o seeing a separator

Muy bueno.

Could you make some kind of note (even if it just some random characters), when you change the scenes?