Yesterday I've read The Circle, and I loved it. My surprise to see that were more from where it came from.
I really enjoyed this one as well! Your writing is captivating :D

I love this its so cute

Aww, this was so sweet! Really well put together, and I loved the dynamic between Ed and Roy. Hearing Ed call himself a "stay-at-home dad" was perfect, too. Nicely done!

Absolutely amazing work here, Elfpen! You gave us not too much, not too little, but just right. The right amount of STORY. I was smiling and laughing the whole time and I definitely didn’t want the journey to end. Thank you for writing, editing, and sharing this piece of joy!

First thing I've read on here and I love it! The idea of Al becomibg the Ambassador for Xing is now cannon to me! And Ed as a house-husband is too! I love this!

When I finished this I tried to swipe for another chapter, but was severely disappointed. Oh well!

Loved this! Ed becoming a writer (and a professor) is great take. And it's great to see Team Mustang keeping up with the Elrics after everything.

That was soooo cute and awesome and amazing

This is interesting. I never thought of what Ed would do with his life without alchemy. Can wait for the next chapter, but just imagined Ed as a professor... some poor student calls him short once, and gets a book to the face and yelled at. lol

I absolutely adore the idea of Ed introducing himself as a "house-husband" when asked about his state license and overturning the basic concepts of alchemy - Izumi would be proud. This was really cute.

Wow.. I just ...loved it... Ed finally settled.. That's what I wanted to read and you just fulfilled my wish... Uhh... I loved those lovely children... Please write more of these...

Guess who's sniffling again.
ITS ME.
Occupational hazard of readings your work I guess.

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW I LOVE IT
I love Mustang in this he sound like a total badass. And state-at-home dad I LOVE IT

Aww, I love the domesticity woven throughout this story. Post-canon stories for FMA are a lot of fun, and I really like what you did with this one!

(I’m now imagining Ed wrestling with a typewriter, and then enlisting Winry to help him. haha.)