I thought that said TENTACLE THINGS HAPPEN and was justly horrified.

What an original take on time travel! I like how even with future knowledge, there are still surprises and difficulties. Poor Sirius.

This is really a unique plot line that I have not seen done before.

I had read this before and I was just taking a look again to see if it had been updated. I do hope that you continue this. It has too much potential to be abandoned just as it is getting good.

Damn this is good!
The sense of foreboding that Hermione feels comes across so clearly. Even knowing basically what's going, there is such tension and creepiness. Part of this might be that I just read Whelped, so I had horror expectations, but even so, I think you have an amazing talent for mounting dread. It feels a lot like the paranoia of Rosemary's Baby (the movie. I don't remember the book having nearly as much tension as this fic).

It looks like you haven't updated in awhile. I hope you decide to continue someday, but even if you don't, this was a pleasure to read. Thanks for writing!

This is so good - Don't worry about those who hate on it, it's good!

Really well done. This was everything I wanted from a time travel fic told from the POV of someone else.

unable to bare - unable to bear

Blacks - Black's

looking to or an update - looking for an update

persuaded to no ask - persuaded to not ask

a prisoners sudden - a prisoner's sudden

its ahead of you - it's ahead of you

Admorusus?

like its - like it's

your wrong - you're wrong

sense of preservation - sense of self-preservation

The Malfoy's - The Malfoys

Georges voice - George's voice

Gindelwald's - Grindelwald's

out most basic - our most basic

them embarrassment - the embarrassment

Heh, this whole bit was just hilarious:
"How does that make you feel?"
Wizard Therapist was a profession that needed to be invented.

basted - bastard

didn't bare thinking about - didn't bear thinking about

focus Black - focus on Black

Silenceo - Silencio

Somethings - Some things

small typo:
not way - no way

I just wanted to tell that I really like your story. It is incredibly well written and I hope you continue.

I don't think I ever read a story from non-time traveler POV. One minor problem I see is Hermione is too passive.

This is an amazing story; a time travel story unlike any I've read before. I love how this story is told from the perspective of a non-traveler Hermione. I hope you can continue with this someday!