Happy two years anniversary!

Hey so I read this fanfic a real long time ago, and can I say I’m so happy you added more. This fan fiction makes me go through so many emotions. I’ve cried three times now this is my third read through. It’s just so good! And Ken and Shinjiro are now my favorite characters because of you. Thank you so much.

AWESOME STORY. I DIDN'T SLEEP READING THE WHOLE SAE TO THE POLICE SHITS DAAMMNN IT'S 4AM ALREADY?!

This story is FUCKING amazing

Why can't we have this ren in the school festival. ripping mask for real

that smash reference thooo, Joker got in

The estare eggs in this.

I’m grateful Minako had a safe delivery. (Also Yukari giving some hand me downs to Minako is so sweet).

Junpei is such a great friend. Loved how he put Fuuka and Minako at ease.

Poor Ken really had it rough. At least he’s surrounded by so many wonderful people who truly care for him.

“I have the cutest and tiniest baby!” Shinji is right...Junpei would say that ;) hehehe

Big bro Shinji making sure everyone gets a heathy meal :)

But yeah, Ken accepting the fussing is...UH-OH HE’S NOT WELL lol but poor Ken.

And the Mitsuru scene was very well done.

Just RIP Shinji though. Poor Tsundere man, getting sold out on crying lol.

And RIP Sae...just...TMI Ren. And of course Futaba trolls lol. But be nice to Ryuji...he earned those three claims to being right rofl.

Writing the cognition part was fun but RIP Cognition Akechi. He never stood a chance. It was satisfying having Haru and Ann beat up at least a version of him...especially Haru.

Poor Yusuke tho lol.

Sae’s pov was great. Having her in denial but having the constant nagging feeling Ren was right and being truthful. A nice hint at the seed he planted is slowly taking bloom, metaphorically speaking, which foreshadows her own change of heart. Having Ren constantly bring up what Makoto went through and her father was oof. But the good kind of oof. Sae needed to hear that.

Akechi’s pov made perfect sense and I like the change he at least some what respects Sae. Shows that all that time working with her wasn’t meaningless. Plus there is the stuff we discussed privately but I won’t get into that here.

And my favorite part...

CHIE

In this house we stan Chie Satonaka.

I could literally HEAR Erin Fitzgerald at every line. You nailed her perfectly.

And I love the plan to use the metaverse to escape, and glad you liked my idea to show that it starts to collapse since Sae is helping them now which means her heart has already undergone its change to let go of her desire to win.

All in all FANTASTIC CHAPTER!

Your best yet and one of my favorites to edit! Good job!

OMG amazing work! I love how you wrote the escape scene and the name you went with for Minako child is perfect! keep up the great work!

As the second half kicked in, I found myself reading some particularly striking brilliance! Specifically, it's the whole Ren Interrogation and Rescue arc, which started off with some comedy gold that came out of some seriously dark stuff, and then got solidified by a very powerful expansion of Sae's character development! Not like the first half's bad, of course, but the first half felt more like an appetizer beside the second half, so yeah, hahaha~ Anyway, looking forward to more, yo! Wishing you more strength and worthwhile times!

Loved the new chapter, can’t wait for the next one
Yavol

FINALLY! Ken and Ren (heh) are okay!

I love the added dialogue between Ren and Sae. Also the small off moment the crew listened in on as he was interrogated haha

I like the addition of Sae joining Chie and Ren escaping the Palace.

I can't wait for the next one! Everything is coming together!

Great chapter! The only thing I would change is how they escaped the building. If the only thing they were using the Metaverse for was to escape unnoticed, they could’ve entered Mementos instead of Sae’s Palace, since Mementos obviously wouldn’t collapse while they were inside. Mementos is the same everywhere else except the subway, so they technically could’ve traveled all the way to Leblanc, or at least far enough away that they don’t have to worry about cameras when they exit. Sae wouldn’t see the casino, but she would see eerily empty streets and MAYBE the distortion if they passed by the subway entrance.

This entire chapter *chef's kiss* beautiful. I also like the jabs Ren threw at Saementioning Adachi's motives for joining the police force, c'est manifique. Until next time

Will you write a Royal version of Ace in the Hole when you’ve finished the story?