Reviews for Imperfect Affection
CHEESEPUFF fg chapter 1 . 8/6/2018
that was amazing.
I loved the way you did the two different letters
Kelenloth chapter 1 . 8/1/2018
DO YOU EVER CRY?! This was so good and SO swell written. Seriously this is one of the most like-the-book(/show) fics I’ve ever read for this fandom. You really nailed the characters and their voices. And I absolutely love seeing these little domestic things celebrated, as it’s part of what the book did really well too. Great job! Thanks for writing and sharing. And finally taking me up on watching the show ;) so glad you love it.
bluejwrtr chapter 1 . 8/1/2018
This is amazing! I always wondered why Hohenheim didn't even try to say goodbye to Ed and Al. Thanks for filling in some important holes for me!
Elenluin chapter 1 . 7/30/2018
Lovely stuff - very much in character for all of them!
weslyn.johnson chapter 1 . 7/29/2018
This is wonderful! A great way to tie up loose strings in the story for Ed, Al, and their father. I love the teasing the brothers did to each other and their recovery process before they leave for home.
Id9916 chapter 1 . 7/29/2018
The letter part was heartwreacking. I think that Hohenheim held so much guilt that the only way for him to find peace was sacrificing himself, just like Ed did in another way. As they say, like father like son.
WriterGreenReads chapter 1 . 7/29/2018
Awwww I love this that ending was so powerful and sweet