not bad bot not great

I want a bit more a/c romance

but it was good

HAHAHAAHA XD

That was bad. But a good bad. Y'know. XD I loved it.

A great story. Very good.

Ok first...

“I’m always tortured and angst-ridden,” Connor corrected her. “Even on the Ferris wheel.”

and second...

Angel took two long strides toward Connor and tried to grab the script from his hand, but the young man dodged him and flipped a few pages forward. His eyes got big, and he said softly, “Oh…so that’s why they call it ‘slash.’”

I actually laughed out loud...I loved this very funny, great dialogue even if a little disturbing

that was so funny. this is seriously the best of all these kinds of stories that i've ever read. hehe- angel trying to grab connors script from him... and carrots. poor fred. great job on this fic!

Great fic! You really nailed the fanfic cliches.

O...these fics are always a hoot. And this one is one of the better ones. Not many can make me laugh so hard I ache...*grins*

sick...twisted...disturbed...I loved it! Absolutely hilarious. keep the awesome writing up.

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Heh heh. Funny. "I'm always tortured and angst-ridden. Even on the Ferris Wheel." LMAO. Funny. And Connor and Lindsey slash? Man, this was funny.

Hehe. This is good.

That was great. I love stories like that. Good work, will there be another chapter or is this a one time thing?

Absolute genius! I loved it and it's always nice to see someone who hates the Connor/Dawn fics as much as I do. Hehe! Excellent work!

ROFLMAO! Ha! I got such a kick out of that!

"Oh," Cordy said sarcastically. "I love fics that completely ignore reality."

::snort:: My thoughts exactly.

rotflmao. That was hilarious. I\m probably one of the 'sick fuck' authors, but i don't go as far as Wes, and Lilah's ghost. Sounds like someone intro'd you to the sicker twisted side of fanfic. Okay, there's not much else And I agree with Connor, Dawn is a little whiny mini non Slayer. And him always angst-y is annoying. But then, he kinda is. Unless he's killing something.

This was hilarious however. I'd like to see one from Buffy's side of the 'verse. Quite amusing idea, actually.

Absolutely hysterical. Have you read HonorH's "Ships that Pass into Type" series? This is very reminiscent of it but still remarkably fresh.