Daww... So sweet.

Ps: Personally, when I saw what was marked on Sebastian's gravestone in the manga and anime, it made me laugh.
Lol, a devil who is urged to hurry to heaven D

I liked your story For my part, you knew how to transcribe the feelings of all the characters according to their character.

It would be interesting to see how you would write the scene from Sebastian's point of view. What do you say?

Good fic

A beautiful piece this one. I like the way you describe the plot. It's slow and thorough yet it doesn't let us be bored by it. It's smooth and elegant. Much like Sebastian himself. It's very fitting to describe the aftermath of his 'death' this way. It feels like his presence still lingers around. I very much enjoyed reading your story.