Reviews for Lily's Out the Window Mystery
61394 chapter 1 . 7/10/2018
Good story
Boris Yeltsin chapter 1 . 7/2/2018
Short, but, well done.
Omega Ultra chapter 1 . 7/2/2018
Well, I'll admit, this was kinda funny for something short and sweet.

I never thought I'd hear Lily, the baby, having a mean right hook.

Though, I do feel like the scenario was a bit contrived mate. Also, the set up was a bit clunky when starting.

Good job though, I rate 7.5/10.
Hatoralo chapter 1 . 7/2/2018
Hm...
Lana causes the incident and is punished for it?
Both are new Things to read in a Loud House fanfic I give you that.
lttlgreg chapter 1 . 7/2/2018
In a house with ten siblings, it is no surprise that even the baby has learned a thing or two when it comes to laying the smackdown!
Star Saber21 chapter 1 . 7/2/2018
Wow. That what i expected when I read the title.
celrock chapter 1 . 7/2/2018
Nice one here. Glad Lily is okay, and also, glad Lana learned her lesson.

Keep up the great writing!
Invader Johnny chapter 1 . 7/2/2018
Lana sure learned her lesson and Lily will not let her forget it, that baby indeed has a mean right hook.

You certainly gave me quite a scare but in typical Loud house fashion things get resolved in the most unexpected of way.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.
NothingBetterToDo11 chapter 1 . 7/2/2018
Lily should have died the Kenny McCormick way.
GennaiArakida-XIV chapter 1 . 7/2/2018
"Well that...and messing with buttons that shouldn't be pressed is a bad idea."
Everyone Else-"YA THINK!?"
crafordbrian17 chapter 1 . 7/2/2018
You said Lily would have a dream after she hit a rock, but I don’t see that anywhere?