| Reviews for Lily's Out the Window Mystery |
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61394 chapter 1 . 7/10/2018 Good story |
Boris Yeltsin chapter 1 . 7/2/2018 Short, but, well done. |
Omega Ultra chapter 1 . 7/2/2018 Well, I'll admit, this was kinda funny for something short and sweet. I never thought I'd hear Lily, the baby, having a mean right hook. Though, I do feel like the scenario was a bit contrived mate. Also, the set up was a bit clunky when starting. Good job though, I rate 7.5/10. |
Hatoralo chapter 1 . 7/2/2018 Hm... Lana causes the incident and is punished for it? Both are new Things to read in a Loud House fanfic I give you that. |
lttlgreg chapter 1 . 7/2/2018 In a house with ten siblings, it is no surprise that even the baby has learned a thing or two when it comes to laying the smackdown! |
Star Saber21 chapter 1 . 7/2/2018 Wow. That what i expected when I read the title. |
celrock chapter 1 . 7/2/2018 Nice one here. Glad Lily is okay, and also, glad Lana learned her lesson. Keep up the great writing! |
Invader Johnny chapter 1 . 7/2/2018 Lana sure learned her lesson and Lily will not let her forget it, that baby indeed has a mean right hook. You certainly gave me quite a scare but in typical Loud house fashion things get resolved in the most unexpected of way. Invader Johnny Signing Off. |
NothingBetterToDo11 chapter 1 . 7/2/2018 Lily should have died the Kenny McCormick way. |
GennaiArakida-XIV chapter 1 . 7/2/2018 "Well that...and messing with buttons that shouldn't be pressed is a bad idea." Everyone Else-"YA THINK!?" |
crafordbrian17 chapter 1 . 7/2/2018 You said Lily would have a dream after she hit a rock, but I don’t see that anywhere? |