Google has failed me. I have no idea who Kato is.
Great chapter, thanks for sharing.

I'm really enjoying this story so far, haven't really read on yet about the Ame orphans.
Also, i think you messed your timeline up. The wiki for three-tails says it was sealed in Rin before Yagura.

The Good End is with Akatsuki running the Rain Country rather than just Amegakure.

Everything is slowly coming together and Yahiko can take over the world with that charisma. Thanks for the chapter! (ﾉヮ)ﾉ*:･ﾟ

Interactions are de best.

This is more completing a review I already left than anything. But I really hope Oka doesn't cripple herself like Nagato did. The Rinnegan doesn't need to cripple the user with the spikes. That seemed more like Nagato's Rinnegan went out of control when he accessed its full power for the first time kind of thing. Hopefully we don't see Oka make that mistake.

Keep up the good work.

More non-Konoha is always a good thing. It is not revealed in the manga itself but the guidebooks that Kumo is the strongest village of them all. Plus Iwa has a Kekkai Tota which is all kinds of awesome. Some Iwa/Kumo fiction with powerful MCs going against Konoha interests would be quite fun to read.

This is a good story. I kind of wish we can see her as a teen instead of a child, but she is an interesting main character. Hopefully we can see some Rinnegan action soon. Keep up the good work.

Beautifully written! Looking forward to updates :D

Oh jeez, this is really good.

you changed the summary, didn't you?

So first of all, I would die for Oka so jot that down. Second, I love the Ame group so much I'm trying not to think of just how bad canon went for them. ;; the fact that Oka has already changed things just by existing has me hopeful for a better end. Also, I gotta say, Sensei-Tsunade just makes me feel gooey in my heart.

Thank you for writing this! I'm glad to have found it!

Oh my gosh an update! Thankyou very much! :)
Congrats on managing to wrangle it in in the end. :D
Another good chapter. I look forward to the next one. :)
Have a great day. :3

Nice!

Aaaaaawwww babies! because Tsunade came with he had to leave sooner! :'(

Is this really SIOC? Because she acts like she doesn't have past memories of her first life or remember (if she saw the anime) Naruto world...
It's more like OC-Insert...
There are few chances but still going into Sam direction of Canon plot (somewhat)