The story is good up to the point where you claim Piccolo was falling in love with chichi the namekian don't mate like that the lay eggs they don't have females among the group so that makes Piccolo ooc everything else is a strong possibility I just thought I'd point that out about your little opening editor's note accord contradiction in it but other than that story has potential

Pas mal j'aime bien bizarre le vegeta/18 et le piccolo/chichi.

much I loved the story, I wish I could continue the, I like alternate universes, Greetings

i've always wanted to see bulma and kid gohan pairing cool

wow good fic i really hope you contineu cause i wanna read more

Awesome chapter, quick and to the point, shows Gohan's emotions really well. Awesome.

update

In my opinion the next chpter should be a lemion

keep it up. this had some quality atmosphere.

Wow...just wow. This story is so good. I really like it. I didn't see any spelling or grammer mistakes and I really like your idea...its really original. I also like your pairing...its different but right in a way.

You've done a good job at keeping the characters in character as much as possible. Yes they are a little different but thats why its called FANfiction! lol

Please update soon. I really like this fic and your writing stile...you have skills my friend! I'll be waiting for the next chapter!

_krillball6_

_Jessi_

First of a very good written story. While its the first time is see this pairing i like it already.I liked the third chapter most but id like to see some more.

But in anycase those are a fine three chapters.

i love it making some more chapters

i like gohan /bulma pairings

please making some more chapters

your friend

dale cameronii

i love it and some more chapters

its an okay start, except goku didn't die on Namek, it was the Kai Planet.

Great, i was looking for this pairing and this was the best fanfic by far!