AAARGH

Although, you might want to work in the fact that they face being evicted a little earlier in the story, kinda took me by surprise

Really good though!

Write more please

The storyline is excellent. I love your writing. Please keep in updating

I like this

I really like your story, also I really hope that you'll post more chapters cus I want to keep reading. please writeeeee

I'm enjoying the series. You've taken a little liberty with the original story with Bram's financial difficulties, as his mom is an epidemiologist in the book. I know a lot of people complained about the total privilege depicted in the movie, both kids live in McMansions, have cars, etc, yet Simon says "I'm just like you." Not many kids he's not. I'm liking that you're introducing some more reality into the situation.

I've just finished reading the book and the first thing I thoght when I was done was; I wish that it existed a book whit Bram's p.o.v, so Thank you.
PS. I hope you continue the story.
PPS. I'm sorry if my grammar is wierd, I'm from Sweden and I'm only in sixth grade.

Bram is so shy..

This chapter was very good but it was very short and it definitely could have had less of a focus on Bram's crush on Simon but I think that that might to been because I just always thought that Bram didn't really like him at the start of the book and eventually fell in love with him and was overwhelmed by the fact that he was Jacques. Overall I thought that the grammar and the over vibe of this was really good it was magical it was almost as if the author(I can't think of her name right now) of the real book was writing this.

I love this! That's a huge commitment-writing the whole book from Bram's perspective- so thanks. Seriously, we need more Simon fanfiction on here.

I really like what you wrote your creativity and strong vocabulary make the first chapter pleasant to read it just wasn't exactly what I was expecting, In the description you said it was the book told from blue/Brams point of view so I though the parts where Simon and Bram were emailing would be the same plot not made up like Simon emailed blue first I did really enjoy your story though and keep up the good work.

Write more!

i love this! please right more!

Im loving It! Please go on!

Dear Over,
This Chapter was great as usual.
I can’t wait to hear Jacques reply to his most embarrassing moment. Thanks for keeping the story alive
I watch love Simon a lot and am halfway through reading Leah
Your friend Sebastian