| Reviews for Hermione's Plan aka Let's Make a Wish |
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bigwoof chapter 8 . 9/17 Excellent story! Thanks.. |
Liljevit chapter 8 . 8/15 I started reading this instead of going to bed and I just had to finish. A really well written story, some small mistakes but the overall execution was great. |
Wolvie26 chapter 8 . 6/1 Love it, especially the way you had most of the witches and wizards saying the goblin king was a myth. When they know that the muggles think the same thing of them and their world. |
lunadream13 chapter 8 . 4/22 great story! |
Guest chapter 8 . 4/13 Great story, though there many missed information or holes in skipping things. And i though it was actually labyrinth itself what this story was about, was dissappointed hermione skipped the whole thing just to proceed with the story. |
mongodatroll chapter 8 . 3/25 I have no idea why this story doesn't get more love than it does, I thought it was excellent. You had a bit in one of the chapters that was a repeat of an earlier chapter, and frankly, if that is the only issue I can come up with, call it awesome and be done. As an aside, this may be the first time I have read a Labyrinth fic that was both worthwhile and actually finished. So, Kudos for that as well. Thank you for your efforts! |
Guest chapter 8 . 2/27 Why do you have Hermione listed as a main character? She is barely in this. Amelia Bones has a larger role. Massively disappointed. |
Kagome Avalon chapter 8 . 2/19 That was kind of bittersweet at the end. I always hate to see a great story end. But, like always all good things must come to an end sometime. Although, did you mean to call Hedwig a he at the end? Again, great story. |
Kagome Avalon chapter 6 . 2/19 Great story so far. Other than some small spelling errors I love reading this story. I don't know if it was intentional or not but the first 13 paragraphs of this chapter are almost the same as near the end of chapter 4. Just wondering about that as I remembered reading that before. I look forward to reading the rest that is posted. |
PaxPacem chapter 8 . 2/6 This was my first Harry Potter/ Labyrinth crossover and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Was wonderful to envision David Bowie as the Goblin King, now that he's gone. Well written, didn't leave any hanging plot lines ... I loved it. |
AerynS chapter 8 . 1/12 Wonderful! |
Rosa Mundi chapter 8 . 11/17/2019 I enjoyed that immensely, thank you. |
JannaKalderash chapter 7 . 9/10/2019 I thought that Arabella Figg had been killed by Dudley in an earlier chapter? |
AslansHow24 chapter 7 . 8/7/2019 honestly, if you're going to write a story at least attempt to remember who is dead and who is not. Fight died in chapter one, remember. |
ordinaryguy2 chapter 8 . 7/16/2019 Wow! Now that was a great story! Loved how you handled it and tied everything together. Wish there had been a little more of the characters from the Underground but I really don't know how that would have worked. I will be recommending this story to others. Great job! |