Reviews for Betrothed
mikael8420 chapter 1 . 7/22
I hope you update soon, I love your story ... sorry if you don't understand me but English is not my original language
abecadlogogo chapter 5 . 7/19
Great story so far. I hope you will continue this fanfic
Raymondjay41 chapter 5 . 7/19
Hopefully you continue this story or allow someone to take it over as this could be fantastic
CarolWim chapter 1 . 7/11
What a pity that this story is abandoned.
K chapter 5 . 5/16
A great start to what promises to be a great story, but why hasn’t more been added to it for nearly two years. That seems an awful waste of such a promising story line. I have thoroughly enjoyed it up to this point and am now waiting in the hope that you will continue it, and eventually complete it.
simonmountney chapter 5 . 4/28
This is a lot of fun, and a unique take on the betrothal contracts, I hope you continue it :)
CMdkelley chapter 5 . 4/20
I would love for this to go on as a 25 chapter story
jo.erlend chapter 5 . 4/12
When is the next Chapter coming
Crystal chapter 5 . 4/8
Hope to see new chapters to this wonderful story
Anon chapter 5 . 4/7
This is an interesting twist on the betrothal contract story and I particularly like how you used Mugwumps Greengrass’ motivations along with Dumbledore’s secrecy to create the situation.

Has a lot of promise — hope you continue some day. Thanks!
stevem1 chapter 5 . 4/6
This is incredible well written. The author is clear, concise, adds believable traditions to the wizarding world, and makes the reader care for both Daphne and Harry.

Here’s hoping the author hasn’t abandoned it.
Wayne Clark chapter 5 . 4/4
Keep up the good work. -
SotV chapter 5 . 3/31
Ok, followed. This is one of the better marriage stories I’ve read.
fvdv123 chapter 5 . 3/17
Man al good story's ends to soon
nibashmangang chapter 5 . 2/27
The plot is really good! I meant it honestly. I really hope to see an update of the story in the near future..it's a crime to not finish such a good story ;)
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