okay the story started pretty well but then i saw the ultra instinct and was like why, why make hime overpowered like i get it everyone wants an overpowered mc but do it over a long period of time because what you did is fucking stupid

Ugh everybody's joining him on training and this Freya yuki bitch is annoying and this is soo ooc and Jesus christ it would take a long time to list all the flaws in this story, but I'll try to say this in one word "disastrous"

Dude you should continue the story, it is very good

Not really a good start to a story. Poor quality of writing, western Greek themed names for some reason, plus a lack of forethought. It really doesn't make sense that his dad's so strong yet just a jonin, it just comes across as forced to make the MC have a dad as cool as Naruto's.

Well constructed story that evens out the character with others hope to see more of this story in the future

Such a big chapter. So much dumb in it that i can't hold myself back from commenting, but can only do it once. Sigh.

won't bother listing everything as there is simply too much stupid in here that i would prefer not to write an essay about how terrible everything is.
People whose brain cells are actually working should stay away from this.

nice

Why isn't your oc a jounin or atleast tokubetsu jounin?
I mean for him to have that power and not graduate early
Also alot of cliche scenes plots and what not

Overall: Pathetic

Are you going to update soon?

Is his name a reference? Because it's spelled wrong. Zephyr.

Second, the only way to get a flee on sight order is the flying thunder god. If Atlas is that level of badass, he should be lord fifth. Hiruzen didn't retake the job because he liked it, he took it up from lack of options.

Purple chakra is gonna get Zep hunted by akatsuki. Purple chakra is a biju indicator.

Hey great story! I love it! One thing to keep in mind though is that you are way over using the term “sweat dropped.” Like, at least six times per chapter, on the low end. And the worst thing though is that you aren’t using it right either, “sweat dropping” happens when you know you’re screwed, this is it, he is way more powerful than I thought. You’ve mostly used in the place of a face palm moment, or for surprise. Just, tone down how much sweat is dropping, please.

Pls more!

Please update!

I hope you’re doing well and I am looking forward to the next chapter. Seriously what is with that Asteris place? The ominousness!

Will wait patiently. Also, thank you _

Only time I’ve seen Yugao as a sensei to a Genin team. Definitely a responsible sensei. Still, I miss that brat Kakashi! XD

Okay, enough whining :) I do enjoy reading this story so thank you.

Too many problems in this story.
1 - The character's growth seems more random than anything else. He became too talented too quickly.
2 - Since when academy students know about elemental ninjutsu ? Outside the uchihas obviously. They aren't supposed to know more than the three main skills of the academy. The students seem more qualified than genin. You have a lot of problems with the concept of power levels.
3 - The OCs are ... meh.
4 - You put the MC and Naruto together too quickly. Why ? It's supposed to be Raiden's story, not Naruto's.
5 - And the story is ... well ... whatever.
I quit. Sorry.