| Reviews for Yearning |
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lolololll chapter 1 . 4/28 No update? |
SonkaD chapter 6 . 9/30/2019 Oh, come on, are you planning on an update? Such a good storyline should not go to waste... |
Guest chapter 6 . 8/13/2019 Eres de bolivia |
Almech Alfarion chapter 1 . 7/23/2019 So, I was trolling Deviant Art a couple weeks ago, looking for things to add to my desktop background rotation, Mostly MLP, but a few for other genre's, when I found a few images that reminded me that Ranma/Ryouga was a thing, and that it's a thing that I like, so I decided to brave the depths that is the ff net archives and managed to find your stuff before I had to come up for air. Really, this is an underappreciated, underutilized, and (unfortunately) generally poorly executed genre overall I think. Most of the Ranma/Ryouga stories I've found focus way too much on Ranma's "Femininity", either totally screwing with Her personality so far as to be OOC, or having her go through some trauma that explains why she might consider the relationship, and more often than not some combination of both. And that's just for the ones that I decided the summary card was written well enough to even consider looking at, of which there are too D*** few... That's not to say that out of those there aren't a few that are actually good. They're out there, but while fun to read occasionally, I'm generally not looking for stories about "Ranko" discovering herself or taking over Ranma's personality, or how Ranma having Amnesia for whatever reason shifts her personality somehow. I'm looking for stories about Ranma; confidence, bravado, martial arts obsession and everything else... going through circumstances that force her to reevaluate her life without totally destroying her character, while finding that spark of commonality between her and Ryouga to make things work and bring them together. You deliver that. Somehow, some way, your Ranma/Ryouga stories, between this, Matchmaking (and Moneymaking), and A Noble Endeavor (Out of Time's still too early to tell, but I have no reason to doubt if it ever updates), manage to keep Ranma as Ranma, while still putting her on the spot to reconsider things and act outside of her usual comfort zone, making the romantic aspects between the two coalesce by bringing existing tensions and personality traits and shifting the focus on them without resorting to drastically altering either Her or Ryouga's personalities to force them together. It's rather refreshing, to be honest. |
Lover of Emotions chapter 6 . 2/3/2019 that is good. update soon please. |
Gary Go chapter 6 . 1/8/2019 This chapter was wonderful |
Finwee Lord of Long Winds chapter 6 . 1/6/2019 Quite well written and useing really interesting concepts. |
god of all chapter 6 . 1/4/2019 Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon. |
Zhor chapter 6 . 12/24/2018 Ranma should've mentioned the kid in the prior vision to Nabiki to lay out the context and distance the subject from immediate cause-of-panic. Tis' only a suggestion however. |
RadicalErin chapter 6 . 11/27/2018 While I wish you would put more detail into things like ranma and nabiki talking, this is otherwise really well written. The way the kiss scene happened, the way ranma seems to feel, that stuff is really good. |
sonicboomboy chapter 6 . 11/22/2018 Sounds like Ranma's visions are getting more racy. |
Tommyt chapter 6 . 11/14/2018 Its goong a bit fast and the boys don't seem concerned enough. That said, I'm really enjoying the story |
BornOnTheBreakOfDawn chapter 6 . 11/13/2018 BWAHAHAHAHA! Looks like Kasumi overheard XD I'm glad you've finally updated this! I've been looking forward to what happens after the kiss. Hehehe. I love Ranma's latest vision... Naughty naughty XP Keep up the good work! |
James Birdsong chapter 6 . 11/13/2018 Good chapter of course |
shugokage chapter 6 . 11/12/2018 Definitely an interesting and good chapter! |