| Reviews for Rewrite the Stars |
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tacotuc chapter 21 . 6/18 Please do a sequel |
BurgerBob chapter 7 . 5/23 bruh i love phineas' personality in this story! |
BurgerBob chapter 5 . 5/23 geez, man. this is reeeeeaally gud writting |
BurgerBob chapter 4 . 5/23 omg this is really gud! |
ChrisMSMB chapter 21 . 7/25/2019 This story was actually pretty cool, not gonna lie. The concept was very interesting and pretty unique spin on the romance. If you ever do a sequel, it would be great to see the hardships Phineas and Isabella would have to go through until they hit their marriage and have children. I also think the two should have met their respective soul mates. I feel like that was a major missed opportunity that should be included in this story. Plus, on a more smaller scale, some mentions on Ferb's love life would be awesome. :P The story ended far too quickly for my liking, so I believe a sequel would be in the works to, at the very least, fill in some plot holes. Other than that, very good story. |
Phinabella lover chapter 21 . 10/27/2018 Please do a sequel of the kids learning about Phin and Izzy meeting theyre soul mates |
Guest chapter 21 . 8/30/2018 Soulmate finding sequel please! |
defiant00 chapter 21 . 8/29/2018 Whaaat? How can it be over already?! I really liked the dual narratives going on, and the changes to "holding hands" were great. Also, I find it hilarious that we both did a Paris chapter within a couple hours of each other; seriously, what are the odds. Personally, I would love more of this if/when you feel up to writing a sequel. |
Phinabella lover chapter 20 . 8/27/2018 Umm. Please fix the chapter |
defiant00 chapter 20 . 8/27/2018 Haha, hot chocolate hot tub, that's great. Whew, you had me worried that this was going to suddenly turn into a time-travel story (which isn't a horrible thing on its own, but it'd seem like that would disrupt the nice pace you've got going on so far). Really enjoying the Phineas and Ferb interactions this chapter. Definitely looking forward to finding out what he's got planned for Valentine's Day too. |
Queen of Kitty Cats chapter 20 . 8/27/2018 I think your upload went wrong. There's a bunch of coding that shouldn't be there. |
storm-aurora chapter 19 . 8/19/2018 Nothing like a little kid to put things in perspective. Chrissy's adorable! Also, glad that Isabella seems to be having an easier time with the "people knowing she's dating Phineas" thing, which makes sense considering she's not nearly as well-known as him. |
defiant00 chapter 19 . 8/19/2018 Love it! Such a happy and cute chapter, it feels like spot-on Phineas and Ferb, and I really like the not-actually-tryouts, which is a brilliant idea. Great job on the other Fireside girls as well, all the conversations and banter around Valentine's day was really fun! |
Snapple chapter 1 . 8/14/2018 I love that song |
defiant00 chapter 18 . 8/13/2018 I quite liked this chapter; good progress and conversations, and I really like how you handled Candace. Phineas' answer at the end there was a little unexpected, I'm hoping he's going to elaborate a little next chapter, but if not then I suppose I can accept that it's Phineas, the eternal optimist. |