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This is a fantastic read please continue

"the next chapter will be up in a matter of hours"
That aside this story is great, the length of this chapter was perfect, flashbacks are supposed to be in italics, glad you can use quotation marks, and you use "little did _ know" too often

Could be longer but overall it is a good story line and good plot. Oh nice cliffhangers by the way

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Feels kinda rushed but I’m definitely excited to see where this will go

longer chapters and your golden

Thanks for all your thoughts so far. I just wanted to lay down the foundation for what's to come. My chapters are going to get longer as the main story takes off, so be prepared. Bye!

Try to make big chapters cuz they feel rushed but it's good

its good

great start...feels really rushed

Great start