Great so far! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Hey there, I just finished reading this chapter, or chapters, and decided to give you some feedback!

Right now your story is a huge block of text, which makes it tough for the reader. A good rule is that after dialogue has been completed a new line should be started, or you can space the lines out more to create a sense of weight in the words.

For example the last line "It truly is weird..." can be its own separate line to add a sense of power to the words and have a greater impact on the reader.

The descriptions that are used are good and so is the grammar, though it's a bit hard to tell with the text all clumped together and I'd recommend fixing the summary as you forgot to capitalize certain words, but overall the story is enjoyable! :D