OMG! I CAN'T BELIEVE HOW THIS ENDED! OMG! In the chapter before the end I thought that the story might continue for a long while and that the story would end with everything being solved, mostly because how heartbroken Chise felt (and my apologies for not leaving a review on that chapter but that day I was super happy that it felt weird me being stupid happy and the end of that chapter so sad to leave a comment) but hell, you leave this story in a point that I can't wait for the next story, I felt every emotion this chapter gave us, Emma being all freak out with Noah but at the end they are together (I felt so sad for them though, they might never see each other again (｡ŏ﹏ŏ) ) Arthur finally being honest to his feelings in front of Evelyn and I could really felt that she was so mad, so sad, so unhappy that she wasn't able to be happy after all but that the mere fact that her beloved one could be safe and sound was most important than herself speaks of a good, very noble, pure and carebeing heart she owns.

I can't wait to read how this story ends, I hope you are good and congratulations for this magnificent series you've been creating.

the Ariels really underestimated the bond between parents and children.

Hello again
I don't know how to start other than saying poor Lynn and poor Mitch once I I was once in their place and somehow I still regret being so prideful that I was unable to said to my best friend my feelings and 5 years later I miss everything with him so this hurts a little but the well again the decease of the tortoise was so sad for me, the baby was born only to see his father die even though is lucky I still feel sad for him .·()·.
I just hope that Blake's headache is nothing bad, just his horns finally showing up

Had a nice day and see you in another chapter

Oh my God, this last chapter sure made me cry. If I'm honest, I've been reading your story since a month ago literally a couple of days before March ended and when I get the notification you upload this chapter I also received the news that a very dear relative had passed away so that part of Mitch and Lucifer saying goodbye to Rebecca made my hear ache badly.
As for the story in general I'm just going to tell you that you rock, these last 6 chapters kept me reading one after another not even noticing that they were long chapters all the story about the Big Four Guardian, the turtle egg, Chise and Elias acting as two worried parents that would do everything they can to protect their own children even if that means lying to them made me what to get to this chapter right away; it was also funny to reassemble some other movie scenes with you story, as for Blake to reach his 5th birthday to have his power show up of Evelyn punching Mitch 1 time and then 2 times because he flinch I laughed as I remember Hotel Transilvania 2 and Atlantis respectively and I don't know why but even a scene of Mitch and Evelyn about to kiss make me laugh when I realized that it remembered ne of a chapter I hate)love form RTTE, just keep on going like this I have cry, smile form ear to ear, laugh and even get anger or feeling good when done received what he deserves (thinking about Dominic and Maze' scene ಠ‿ಠ).

We'll, this is my last review for the time being, read you some other time and thanks for answering my doubt. Oh! And don't make Evelyn gets to much angry with her parents, everything is so that she and her older sister could be safe and sound.

Til next time

Before I read the last 6 chapters: is Lauren a boy or a girl, I'm all mess up some times you us she to talk about Lauren but you also write that Lauren is a wizard, the male of a witch so I'm all messed up: is Lauren she or he?

Hope you could answer me that one, and tomorrow I'll be writing the last review for this 65 chapters.

Read you soon

Hello it's me again, what do I tell you? On the last chapters I've been reading you really make men cry! (｡ŏ﹏ŏ) First with Mitch dying and Evelyn going all wild and loosing herself, oh man I did cried a little but then this chapter comes with a scene that made me remember the part where I cried the most when seen Wolf Children, hell is a good thing I have 9 chapters ahead to stop crying (I hope so)

Keep on reading

Yeah, it's me again,I know I said that I would leave a comment again in the last chapter but, Oh my God! That scene from the couple readying the ruins send me back to my childhood as I figured out that the scene some how resambles when Kira and Milo read the murals about the crystal Kira posses in Disney movie Atlantis and again picture the whole part in my brain but with Chise and Elias instead, I don't know if I'm such a movie girl or something else is wrong with me.

So then, let's continue reading and I guess I'll leave another comment whenever I found another reference for a movie/anime or something else I like. Oh and take this as a simple suggestion but it would be perfect if you said that any chapter has reference to some other stories.

Hi there!
This is my first review to your story, mostly because I thought it was completed but when a e-mail arrived to me about an update of your story I was do happy that there is still more and I have to get to the lastest chapter at once; my intention was to leave a review on the last charter to talk about the wonderful story and how you write it do we readers want more but then the last scene of this chapter being so SAO I literally read that part with You, Kirito and Asuna's voices (｡• ᵕ •｡) .
Anyway, I'll keep on reading the story and I'll leave a review at the last you update by yodat (unless you upload another chapter so I will leave a comment on that one)

Keep on going

7 year olds don't talk like this...7 year olds aren't supposed to be doing stuff like this. you could've did a time skip or something to make it more accurate. they're 7 why are they "dating" i get that they aren't but i see the message that it's giving off, dont get me wrong this is a wonderful story but im cringing at the fact that they're 7 and this is happening.

this is super confusing are they 12 or 7

Had to pause in my reading. Why did they fly from the Grand Canyon all the way to Seattle, Washington, when L.A. was right there? Literally. Driving is like 7-8 from Grand Canyon to LA, even with Las Vegas on the way.

So question. When the fuse will they forever stay so or will they seperate. Just wondering as they both have boyfriends and that be... Interesting to say the least. Just saying. Can't wait to find out, but I just had to mention my food of thought curiosity.

I like ur story it's interesting and varies from the ones I usually read so it's a nice change of pace. But I am curious as to y u marked this story as complete so I just want to know if ur done with this story and not continuing it or r u making another continuation as a sequel to this. Thank you if u read this comment

7 years old and now they are a cute couple. What parent let's a 7 year old girl stay in a boy's room all alone? And Twister? What is this...fan service at age 7? Are you a Lolicon or just a pervert. Is this a cheap way to get "favs"? I'm sorry, but I hope other readers don't find 7 years dating a good thing. Even hardly any Anime or Manga goes that far. The sad thing is there is so much potential with these characters to build an awesome story than to resort to cheap fan service.

Must be the G rated version? Sin ce when do parents cow down to their children EVERY TIME? Especially with how dangerous magic can be especially with the untrained. Don't you think your story has kind of gone off the rail? Parents always wrong? Parents ALWAYS made to look like fools? Canon doesn't go that far. They tell their kids not to do this and not show humans that and yet EVERY TIME the children do exactly the opposite and the parents fall all over themselves apologizing to their kids! To happen sometimes makes a lot of sense, but every time and it seems there is no reason for Elias or Chisel to be in the story. What purpose do they serve in this story? Comic relief? I am afraid it is hurting an otherwise good premise of a story. I really like the idea behind the story, but I am afraid it is getting too unrealistic, even for fantasy. Since when does every kid, who doesn't know that magic, mage and such are real, see the girls with horns, claws and tails, and every one of them just thinks it's soooooo coooool maaan! Not one is afraid, ran away and tells their parents, cops, or someone. That just makes the story sound unbelievable and a joke. I believe if you would step back and look at it, you would understand where I am coming from. Thanks for your time.