| Reviews for The Grand Saber |
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AGENT 327 chapter 1 . 1/23 "What is thy bidding, my Master?" Eh... better for said Master to be Shirou Emiya than Sheev Palpatine, am I right? Still, imagine what Shirou and EMIYA could have 'traced', had they (somehow) ended up in the world of "Star Wars: The Old Republic"... |
Ryoji Mochizuki chapter 2 . 12/11/2018 huh. |
Hunter of Entities chapter 2 . 8/25/2018 Sometimes you just need to read a wank fic |
JAKEkenstein chapter 2 . 8/16/2018 This is awesome. Any chance of illya summoning Darth Maul? |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/7/2018 Darth Vader Nasuverse Okay, that's pretty fucking cool. |
Guest chapter 2 . 5/28/2018 To "to guest" Your point? This is fanfiction, you're not expected to strictly follow the laws of a fictional setting. Most of all, fanfiction is a site where it involves stories based on an already existing fandom, a site that any user could unleash their imagination and creativity in the form of fan stories centred on any ideas one thought of (which is what's attractive about this site in the first place). As such, these stories aren't canon. I don't see why you should so pedantic with something as small as fictional characters from other settings being put in a role (which logically shouldn't happen) from a different setting. |
to guest chapter 2 . 5/27/2018 and you know grand servants can only be summoned by the world correct? |
ultima-owner chapter 2 . 5/25/2018 he's a force to be reckoned with. (pun intended) |
Guest chapter 2 . 5/24/2018 To challengunnar . dale (nice dot in your username by the way, my first comment couldn't even refer to you properly) You do realise this is not Darth Vader back we he was alive, but him summoned as a servant, a GRAND servant, right? Because if you didn't know, most mythological characters who are summoned as servants tend to be stronger than they were back when they're alive. Heck, some servants tend to be as strong as their mythology describes them to be, and we all know that myths tend to make an individual more impressive than they are, more often than not (E.g. There's a myth that a man can take down an army with their bare hands, so an unarmed servant summoned under that myth can take down an army with ease, when in fact, their real life selves might've actually had help, they simply strategised for a long period of time before hand, or they just simply won through sheer luck), see where I'm going with this? There might be lots of myths about Darth Vader made by those who know of him in the Star Wars universe for all I know, so I wouldn't be surprised if his capabilities are more akin to the mythological than the practicality. |
Guest chapter 2 . 5/24/2018 To You do realise this is not Darth Vader back we he was alive, but him summoned as a servant, a GRAND servant, right? Because if you didn't know, most mythological characters who are summoned as servants tend to be stronger than they were back when they're alive. Heck, some servants tend to be as strong as their mythology describes them to be, and we all know that myths tend to make an individual more impressive than they are, more often than not (E.g. There's a myth that a man can take down an army with their bare hands, so an unarmed servant summoned under that myth can take down an army with ease, when in fact, their real life selves might've actually had help, they simply strategised for a long period of time before hand, or they just simply won through sheer luck), see where I'm going with this? There might be lots of myths about Darth Vader made by those who know of him in the Star Wars universe for all I know, so I wouldn't be surprised if his capabilities are more akin to the mythological than the practicality. |
challengunnar.dale chapter 2 . 5/24/2018 Ok i got a smaaaaaallllll problem with vader's fight against gilgamesh. First off, Gilgamesh isnt as stupid stupid as you wrote, just really, REALLY arrogant. he's actually extremly intelligent so he wouldn't just stand there and do absolutely nothing and throw swords while vader gets closer to him in fact he probably just enuma elish to the face. Actually no gilga would throw more swords. So many sword that it block the effing sky! And Vader is does NOT have have either the sheer speed nor reaction time to be able to cut down EVERY. SINGLE. SWORD. and come out unscathed. Especially since most of his focus is going to be using the force to stop some of the swords realistically. Also I highly doubt vader's lightsaber could cut through every sword. Eventually he find something that either has magic that lightsaber, or a divine weapon that he cant cut. This really could have been a really good fight scene between two epic power houses but you kinda ruined it with a stupid gilgamesh that only throws swords. Good story aside though. |
Nerf585 chapter 2 . 5/24/2018 Gilgamesh, your fucked. Plain and simple |
Rangle chapter 2 . 5/24/2018 Well, Rey is probably the Ultimate Grand Saber Class. She only needs to sneeze to erase the universe. |
edboy4926 chapter 2 . 5/24/2018 Awesome chapter Question, are magic and the Force the same or separate energies? Asking to see what exactly if Vader is using only Shirou’s mana to stay active or is he using the force. By the way, can Shirou trace a lightsaber? It is still classified as a sword. |
Angron chapter 1 . 5/23/2018 Shinrou summed Dark Vador?! Vador should make Shirou his apprentice and teach him what is the (dark side?) Force |