Doesn't sound like Hermione gives much of a fuck about Harry - going *9* months without even bothering to tell him she's going to be popping out his offspring? Yeah, soooo loving...

This is a great outline of a story, though I wonder why she didn’t give Harry a heads up before running.

Even if the story is fine there things that you missed or are not explained.
Hermione pregnant and just ups and leaves with information that somebody needs, not telling harry or bringing him along nor being in contact, is weird and not possible they both need each other.
Why is harry not question or raving against the weasley women?
Just end it like that without any mention how the weasleys are doing?

Good grins. Thanks! Especially loved AD's 'crux!
Always wondered if it was pure coincidence that Albus Percival Wulfric Brian Dumbles could just as easily be A Perfectly Worthless Bastard?
lol
Never seen that used in a story, it should be ...

HOT DANG! This is one hell of a story thank you!

Hi,

This is a very nice tale. Thanks for sharing it.

Old-Crow

I loved this.

bonne fic!

The way Albus was arrested was very funny :-)

Wow, Hermione should be ashamed of herself and possibly arrested. While the saying her body her choice is fine while pregnant, once the baby was born not informing Harry he was a father is criminal on par with kidnapping. I would not have forgiven her for running off.

Excellent! Thanks so much

bonne fic!

Wow! Another great story. I read your other story where Harry joins the RAF, and this is equally as good

This is one of those stories that shows the true nature of APWB Dumbledore. I've seen him as a Dark Lord for some years what with everything he put Harry through. I liked this very much and think that Hermione escaping from the old goat rapist control was great. Too bad Harry wasn't able to get away as fast. Though I am a bit surprised that neither Harry nor Hermione sent any kind of message back to friends telling them of the low grade education they were receiving. If they didn't want to trust sending them during school then they could've done it during summer vacation. Harry I'd think would've sent a letter to the girls who helped protect him over the past year before he managed his own escape.

Awwwww, this could have been a truly awesome story (well, except for how long Harry and Hermione were for some unexplained reason kept apart for so very long). It wouldn't take you very long at all to reformulate this into a great story, just space everything out a little better and, yeah, expound A LOT on all the relevant points (you're totally right - this really does read like a semi-expanded story outline but dude, it's got teeth so I'd suggest running with it!).