good job i cant wait to read the next chapter and also see how shepard plans to find out fireteam rogue's secret keep up the good work

Uh ohh susppppiiiissssiiiooonnn!

Thank psyman for another awesome chapter. Good luck with the next one, and as always have fun writing.

I feel like it's kinda weird for Hacket to be calling any of the Guardians "son". Aren't they like older than most Krogan at that point?

Just skimmed through the story till the last update, flow is a bit better, but dialogues are still quite stilted. Fireteam Rogue’s actions and intentions are very obvious « fix-its » for the plot of ME, and a lot of their interactions with the rest of the ME cast seems forced as a result. I can see this story just turning out to be a rehash of canon except with a few more tag-alongs.
It would have been more interesting if fireteam Rogue had decided to just stay on their own and acted in the way the best saw fit, instead of becoming Shepard companions.

Few typos here and there, but nothing too egregious that takes me out of the story.
However one thing that bothers me is physical descriptions being totally absent in some cases. For instance, you use the name of armor sets, shaders, shells, and exotics to describe the gear the guardians are using.
I have around 3000 hours in Destiny 2, and I have a hard time remembering every one of the cosmetics so imagine the situation for a reader who’s not familiar with Destiny. Having the name written helps googling, but doing so takes you right out of the story since you gotta tab out.

The way fireteam Rogue is introduced is a bit clumsy, doesn’t flow very well.
Premise isn’t original, however having multiple Guardians instead of the usual single one in the ME universe is. Curious to see where the story goes and how they interact.

Glad this fic isn't dead, there are very few good destiny crossovers. I can understand the Guardians plans but aren't the putting their eggs in one basket? They should have a backup plan in chase this one goes south, like giving humanity the tech to run and hide if it needs to like probability kiln, better ftl, cloaking and non element zero based tech, with that they have a fail safe to save as many humans as they can.

Since When did Mara show some nice flatteries towards 'us', 'our' Ghosts, even, and the [ Traveler ] and the [ Light ] [ Itself ] ?... [ wary expression ]

could've been worse: subjected to the Cabal empire they are (not 'our' GA Humanity). [ grimly said ]

the Vex and the Hive and the Taken, etc but they're already too overkill so no.

yes the 'Vanguard'. [ sadly smiled ] 'we' need More of their influence being passed down, after What happened during...That expansion, and beyond it. [ grumbled to those groups ]

[ reveals a bit... ]

'the Geth think the reapers are gods,'.

[ by the [ Shard ] of the [ O ] , Where have 'I'/'we' heard That before? ] [ rhetorically grunted while thinking back to the Vex Collective Sol Divisive within the Black Garden... ]

[ well, except the Patterns are Far more of a vast Threat, yet even the Network isn't the one on the top pinnacle... those [ Two ] are and by through [ their ] influenced races and beings. ]

well this was quite nice to see here

Awesome chapter.

Is that weird that for some reason I want cal to have a romance with Tali