Reviews for Dance of the Sylph
LetsGoKoby chapter 6 . 6/27
so it's definitely a little fast, but I don't think it is too inorganic. Leia had an interest in him initially (platonic, but w.e) and then after seeing he needed comfort, comforted him (I would assume this is personality, rather than particular interest yet), and was obviously moved by his comment (really fricken cute by the way). He is just attracted to her pretty early-nothing weird there! Not like he is proclaiming love or anything lmfao

I really love how you did this, by the by, and I'm glad you've come back to finish it. Leia is definitely interesting-I like that you made her motives freedom which directly contrasts with how heroes are. It's a super interesting conflict and I look forward to seeing how it will progress. Plus Aizawa saying that she's still a hero was absolutely adorable and a beautifully pure moment! Not cheesy or forced and I really liked it :)

I'm interested in seeing an Eraserhead vs Sylph fight-I feel like she is definitely the more disadvantaged, but that's if he could even keep track of her I guess. Where would you put her strength in comparison to other heroes? I'm assuming that top hero in Canada would be different than top hero in Japan due to differences in villain activity?

Either way, keep up the good work! Looking forward to the next chapter when you have the time :)
Anonymous7654321 chapter 6 . 4/4
Oh my god! This story is sooo amazing and cute! It’s deserves more love and views! I like slow-burns as long as it’s not too slow. I like Leia and Aizawa’s relationship but I hope it doesn’t turn out into Aizawa being the only reason that she wants to become a better hero and person. I understand Leia’s point of view of killing villains and it makes sense. So it would be interesting how her character grows and progresses. Also, why would she want to be a hero if she had to do things a certain way? Did she realize that before becoming a hero? Please continue to update this story. I would like to see where this goes.
octaviaxanadu chapter 6 . 3/31
my heart's for more so please continue with what you're doing it's great
TooMuchBatman chapter 6 . 3/31
SO PRECIOUS
Otakugirl1996 chapter 6 . 3/30
Yes! I'm so glad you updated. I really love this fic.
lmc9389 chapter 5 . 2/13
This is better than I expected hope you continue
AveonThorn chapter 5 . 10/21/2019
I hope you do continue this one. I like the character you've created and how she fits so nicely into the world.
Guest chapter 5 . 10/11/2019
Please don't give this up. It's an amazing idea and such a great execution, would be a shame to see it given up. But I understand falling out of a fandom.
Annielen chapter 4 . 8/27/2019
Mannnn I love this so much
thunderyoshi chapter 4 . 11/26/2018
This is so awesome. I love Leia so far, and I can't wait to see more of her character, and her Quirk. Interesting that she considered killing the villains too.

Awesome work, I'm looking forward to seeing how things go!
PinePair chapter 4 . 11/25/2018
:-)
lovelyhatter chapter 4 . 11/22/2018
Loving this story so far! Also I’m kind of glad it’s not going to be slow burn.
Applejax XD chapter 4 . 11/21/2018
awesome, that was clever of her to try and find out more about the villain's quirk XD
KiySky chapter 4 . 11/21/2018
First bame basis already? Whoop!
hobifam chapter 4 . 11/20/2018
I’m so glad you updated! The wait was totally worth it since it was an amazing chapter. I’m really loving the character so much and her quirk is very interesting, I liked how you developed the scene to make it so that it includes her but not totally changing how it originally goes down. I can’t wait for the future chapters.
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