The outsider's PoV is always so interesting and your OCs are nice believable people, really enjoying the feel to them. This is great!

Super interesting take with the POVs , and you write Ed very in character. Keep up the good work:)

I really like this fic- outsider viewpoint fics are always cool to read. Watching the other characters interact with Ed is great, keep it up!

I noticed that a few times you wrote blonde instead of blond when referring to Ed. Apart from that I'm loving it, most of all when they are all looking at the engine without any clue on what to do, a bunch of so manly men it made me laugh. Your original characters are very well buildt and I like the fact that they have different 'voices', so one doesn't get bored reading them. Thanks for the chapter.

I really like the pacing of the story and the way you made your characters meet, it's different and nothing like the other fanfictions I've read before. Keep up the good work

Dude, this is an awesome story so far, love the perspective, it really adds some depth. I hope you update soon, it sounds like it’s going to be another adventure for poor Ed!

I plainly love outsiders' pov so I may be biased, but it looks great so far. Everything was well described and paced, and Marsia is quite interesting, not boring at all. I can't wait for more!

I love everything about this. From the minor details of people noticing Ed's gloves and how strange they are to see on a teenage boy to the inner tone of boive that everyone has, it really feels like something taking place in the early twentieth century. It's only been one chapter and already I can't wait to see how everyone who's been badmouthing the moody teenager in their head will react to finding out he's actually a State Alchemist. The only questions I have are when this takes place in the timeline and where Al is.

This fanfiction has caught my interest. I find it really interesting on the perspective of other people. I can't wait till the next chapter