Is it just me or do you wanna hug GLaDOS and comfort her all day? I just want to give her a nice soft cuddly hug and tell her everything will be fine. Well, social distancing *cries and curls up into a ball*

I think GLaDOS would look coooool with long hair. Maybe u should write a drabble about her somehow growing it back.

You should right a sequal. This is so good and amazing.

Hi. So I think the story is fantastic and I really like it especially as it is a completely new idea and I like all the different ideas out there but sometimes the same ideas can get repeated over and over again. So yeah I’m glad that you decided to try something new but I need to ask: would there be a sequel? I know it sounds like a cheesy question and probably when you’ve got asked a lot but it just ends in such a way that I feel like a sequel will be beneficial but if you don’t want to add a sequel that’s fine too because I guess it It would work without.

I love this story! Such an interesting take on the universe and a truly original plotline even as it follows the Portal narrative. Do you plan on finishing soon-ish?

jgtknjknjk i came back to this to read it a second time and like? i was so happy? cause there was a new update? and i was like holy, that's like really good timing? n i love this book so much so i was like twice as happy?

thank you so much for writing this tho! i hope you feel better soon and that your job is going ok!

You're baaaaack! Sorry I took so long to read this. It usually takes me a few seconds, but... eh, life.
Anyway, great chapter! I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens next. I wonder if you're going to incorporate the 'shoot the moon' sequence somehow. Not to rush you or anything, but I hope you upload again soon!

Dang, Lira can be scary!

Gosh this is so seriously underrated. Half the time it didn’t feel like reading fanfic, it felt like I was reading a super cool dystopian novel and I’m so here for it. It’s okay that you’re taking time between chapters bc I get that life happens but WOW I beg of you to not abandon this, it’s so so so good and I NEED to know where it goes... thank u for what you’ve done so far tho. This deserves so much more attention. I adore the way you’ve written Glados and how you’ve translated her into this AU the most, but all of it is just so captivating. Please do keep going even if it takes a while!

I almost forgot... I've seen your character designs and they're really cool! That's dedication right there.

I discovered this recently and it's awesome to see a good, original Portal fanfic that's longer than 2000 words in the works! The whole concept of "deviations" is really unique when applied to this game, and this story deserves more attention! The way you work Harry Callaghan's characters into the picture is seamless.

Also... that plot twist! GLaDOS is my favorite character in Portal (forger the hero, genius villains are great!) and I can tell from the way you characterize her as "Glados" that you definitely put thought into it. Your writing style is engaging, keep up the good work. I'm really looking forward to the next update!

My only critique is that the name "Glados" just feels weird not being an acronym, "Gladys" seems better. Maybe that's just me, but whatever.

Since I'm new, does this story update regularly or have some sort of schedule? Can't wait for more :D

Don’t worry about the hiatus, this fic is totally worth the wait! Awesome character designs by the way ;)

Thank you so much for keeping this story going! I still love this story and I always look forward to a new chapter. I'm also wondering how Virgil knew about the GLaDOS project killing Caroline. Please put more out soon!

The last couple lines are poetry

thank you for updating! :D this chapter was amazing but the ending,, ,hh is this allowed
Wheatley's been through a lot in such a short amount of time,, oof
Big Dipper's nickname for GLaDOS is so cute ;v; Europe fits her so well too,, but th e n