Reviews for The Mini-Neal
gabelou1991 chapter 1 . 6/24
J'aime bien mais le petit Damien peut-ĂȘtre n'importe qu'elle enfants.
Courtney Elizabeth1 chapter 1 . 8/31/2018
awesome haha. Poor Neal.
PrincessMagic chapter 1 . 8/2/2018
Haha! This is fab!
Suzululu4moe chapter 1 . 7/12/2018
Hah Batman though the cia office is surprisingly a safer location than home in Gotham.
sanguinefelis chapter 1 . 5/21/2018
I love everything about this, from Damian ruining their cover to Caffrey being stuck with the extra paperwork. It's just like Damian to be so blunt and entirely unapologetic about the extra work he's causing his older brother. After all, he's only telling the truth, right?
Vi-Violence chapter 1 . 5/16/2018
I enjoyed it, but there's just once thing I'm getting hung up on, no one asked who would offload their kid on him?
KeJae chapter 1 . 5/13/2018
Peter, ignore a kid in the office? Not likely, especially if he's sitting next to Neal ;) You'd think Damian would resent being babysat, but be glad it's Dick taking care of him instead of say, Jason. Peter and Jones would be amused by a kid barely counting Neal as an adult (I saw something on Pinterest recently showing Bomer quoted to say his season one character of Neal was based on his 3-year-old at the time...). Damian isn't a normal child so it was interesting to see Neal explaining him... or trying to without giving too much away. Ooh, Peter isn't getting on Damian's good side... you know, I just realized that's probably why Damian blew their cover! Ha-ha, Peter tries to go into the case like normal and pull a quick cover with Neal, but of course, Damian has to go and blow it repeatedly before solving the case for them :D It sounds like Neal had fun judging the pretty jewelry, which Peter probably found amusing. I think Peter enjoyed the day overall. He got to see a different side of Neal, generally enjoyed some aspects of Damian, and then making Neal do the paperwork was icing on the cake ;)
grandshadowseal chapter 1 . 5/12/2018
It's not really got anything to do with this but I got instant batman beyond flashbacks when Peter said Welcome to my world! XD

And Dami you are so helping with that paperwork when no one is looking!
LunaSolenna chapter 1 . 5/12/2018
This is adorable and I was laughing the whole time! All of the interactions were perfect, and I love Damian and, well, pretty much everything about all of this.
PhantomGoat13 chapter 1 . 5/12/2018
This was fantastic! Are you planning on doing a sequel? Like Bruce's response to Damian's detective skills or something? I was chuckling throughout this story, was a real pleasure to read it!
WildNoa13474 chapter 1 . 5/12/2018
This is very cute
Guest chapter 1 . 5/12/2018
Love it. Can't wait to read more of your stories.