In all the worlds a good uchiha is a dead uchiha.

Dude,just put up an AN telling the readers that the story is not actually a just an OC named Naruto.

Now THAT was an entertaining omake! Boink goes the hobbit! I quite enjoyed this chapter, even if I wish that we could have seen Naruto annoying Endeavor (or even just seen Endeavor's reaction to Naruto's declaration). I can't wait to read more, and to see some Naruto vs Gaara vs Stain action.

Dear lord I forgot how short Minami is. I mean it's one thing to see her on the page but another to read her height on a page. I am sad to say that the first thing that came to mind between that and the cold shower scene was "omg Naruto's going to boink a hobbit!"

Fun chapter as always. I feel like the time skip was handled well. I could be wrong but isn't Minami 21? Regardless, I look forward to reading what chaos Naruto and Minami get up to next.

P.S. the omake was rather fun. Rooting for Naruto in a Deadpool costume and Minami as Domino next (I realize this is one cancelled fanfic too late but I can dream can't I?)

I love the Deadpool esque nature that you sprinkled onto our core Naruto. And reading the end comments, I see that it was probably deliberate! I am enjoying this pairing already. While I'm not sure how I feel about them as a romantic couple, as a duo they are definitely clicking, imo. Interesting use of Madara, I like the nod to the Uchihas' precious clan role as 'police'.

It's quite interesting that you are not only using a lot of Naruto character, but that the vast majority so far are. As I said, I don't normally enjoy that sort of story where the entire cast is supplanted, so it goes to show just how much I am enjoying your story that I not only dont mind but actually enjoy their inclusion.

Looking for more!

Usually I wait until at least a couple of chapters in until I follow a story but you sir have my subscription . I loved the semi comical way you addressed the common complaints at the end of chapter 1 (and tbh, I am one of those who doesn't usually like to see lots of one universes characters set in another universe). But, you have done a good job so far and honestly I have read so many OC Naruto fics lately that even a darker Naruto that is true to the character is a breath of fresh air.

I am disappointed to see this story cancelled, but I will continue to read and enjoy :)

hey its fine do what you need to what ever that may be and your an amazing writer in my opinion. if trolls are coming at ya tho, ignore um enough said they don't really matter in the long run. I find myself typing this a lot since well I'm sure you know how this site is.

Aw man just as it was getting good...ah well if that's how you feel then it's your choice. Though if you do end up doing a new version, please keep the paring the same.

I loved this story so much because I think the pairing is cute but I do believe you haven't got the passion for it.
Perhaps try to find a way to make it your own rather than try forcing yourself to keep writing.

Think up a way to make it enjoyable for yourself and I bet the next one will be even more amazing.
I love the writing style and I can't wait to see what you do next.

Although feel free to take a break to get yourself back to peak condition. It is easy to burn out if you keep it up like this.

Here's hoping you find the path and I hope to see a new take on this fic.
Thanks for all the laughs!

It wasnt that bad, a proper story will be great. Just drop the pairing, or make her a dedicated suporter. Best of luck

Can you go back to work on your batman x naruto story? I kinda like the concept of a whole morality shift here and would love to read more.

Damn

awww crapbaskets, will it stay up though since i quite liked it and the pairing

serious question: how big was the pizza and what restaurant cause if it was from pizza hut i congratulate both of you since i find their pizza to be hella greasy most of the time

i like this alot and hope that after Naruto takes down Stain the alot of people start questioning Madara