This must have somehow slipped down in my inbox and got buried. Great ending, I love all the happiness and how all the girls are getting along. I would have loved a glimpse of what the kids they had with Shinji would be like.

Man, this is weird. Katsuragi-san's Dragon Maid was great, but while it has enough simi8lirities that you're obviously the same author, between word choice and technical errors, flat characterization and more simplistic plotting, I'd swear this was written with two to five years less experience, it's such a massive step down. Did you change pre-readers or have a collaborator before? It's shocking, and honestly without having just come from KsDM I wouldn't have stuck through the first chapter, despite my usual policy of giving almost anything three as a trial.

It felt super awesome to read shinji finding something to fight for in the first chapter.

I love this story ever thought about doing a second one maybe set it afew years down the line shinji and his wives having kids just an idea anyhoo really enjoyed reading it

Technically, Miia WAS his first. She was the only one of those three whom he climaxed into that night. Because of this, she is the actual winner.

"This will be a smaller story" *glances down* 16 chapters, 200k words...lol

Must admit - I wasn't expecting to stumble across this story, but I'm really glad I did. Fantastic work and I loved every moment of it!

Especially Su, Racnee, and Lala. I love how she became Shinji's guardian angels of sorts (Lala more literal than the others) - always behind him, ready to swoop in and save him. That and the scenes with Shinji and Lala in the planes of limbo were just really sweet _

My disappointment is immeasurable...and my day is ruined.

A good showing for best girl at the end there, and a good show for the cast all around.

I laughed pretty hard when it turned out that Suu had hentacled the nurse off screen, and I think it's very fitting that Shinji joins hands with Lala to become a shepherd of the dead in his spare time.

All in all, a very satisfying end to a very satisfying series. I look forward to seeing what you may come up with next.

Such a great story, you truly have a way with words!

It certainly had been quite a ride.
I am also sad to see it end.
It was certainly cool and interesting while it lasted.
Thanks for it.

I really enjoyed this story. The interactions and the developments of the characters was wonderfully done in my opinion. I hope that you'll do an omake for what happens a few years down the line. Write on.

Another good story comes to an end. I'm glad he banged Tio, though I wish we'd seem (well, read) the tryst. I'm also kinda sad he didn't get the minotaur harem from the farm like Kimihito did, but oh well. A part of me is hoping you'll do an alternate fic somewhere down the line in which Kimihito gets his harem, but on the flipside Shinji gets a job at the farm and nabs the minotaur girls.

Anyway, what's next? I look forward to finding out. Bye for now!

It is sad to see this end, but it doesn't take away from joy this brought me from beginning to end. I had two petty things I would've liked to see: some more details of Kensuke and his issues, snd maybe a continuation of that confrontation with Smith this chapter. All in all, love yhe crossovers you come up with for Shinji to delve in and I can't wait to see where you go from here. Thanks again for the story and take care.

hope you be happy!