It reminds me of middle school

This definitely makes you feel for Lucy and all that she has been through and is feeling

I really love this story. I mean it's a really good fanfiction to read!

I loved the way you made Lisa comment on something's Lucy could include in her short little story, and I love the idea of the story symbolising what Lucy was going through, when being bullied at school. Lisa's final comment of her saying that Lucy "is loved" is really heart warming, coming from the stereotypical little genius that Lisa is.

It also reminds me of when I first wrote my first first story, my older sister reviews and gave some criticism towards it and what I must learn when creating another story. But that was only a draft. It also reminds me of when I first spoke to a fanfiction writer by the name of Cypher DS (who writes fan fictions on the adult dating sim HuniePop) and I told my ideas for a fanfic I'm creating, and he told me his opinions and that it could be great.

Overall this is a good Loud House fanfiction. You my friend probably make the best ones! Job well done lad, is all I can say!

It's nice to see Lisa being nice and caring about her family members. I also wonder if Lucy gets bullied. I mean, lots of fanfics say she does but we've never actually seen it in the show before.

Yeah. This story is likely based off Lucy's experiences. As morbid as the 2nd half of her work is, plenty of us have been there. We've been bullied for being different and since we don't feel like anything can be done we wish harm upon them. But Lisa showing genuine concern was touching and proves she's not a 1D monster some people judge her for.

I agree that it'd be nice to have a continuation of this. Heck there should be an episode based off this.

This is an interpretation of Lisa that's equal parts unusual and fascinating. The way you portray characters is one of the reasons why I love your works, Tye. Great job as always.

I like it. Not enough Lisa fanfics that show her in a good light.

Bravo
Amazing it was awesome

I am not Sure what to Think of this.
I have a hard Time believing that Lucy is that alone, having similar-minded People at schools to hang out with.

Yet, when Lisa tells the others... The wrath of the Loud clan is a terrible one.

This story made me sad in any case... Poor Lucy.

I liked how Lisa helped Lucy with her story here.

Keep up the great writing!

I don't know why, but stories about Lisa acting like a human being, rather than a robot in a toddler's body, are always some of my favorites. And this is such a heartfelt story, interlaced with some nice humor. Let's hope Lucy heeds her sister's advice.

Interesting take on Lucy's writing.

My goodness this is engaging. I hope we get a continuation with Lucy coming forward about her problem

This was a really interesting depiction of both Lucy and Lisa. It’s also always nice to see Lisa showing concern for family. All in all, another great story! I eagerly await your next work!